~ My Private Garden ~
5 Line Poem (2,2,5,7,5)14 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
What a beautiful poem and lush garden landscape. I enjoy this style of poetry a little better than the traditional three line 5-7-5. The first two lines are like a diving board, setting up the poem. My best to you and in the contest. I hope you are well and good.
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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What a beautiful poem and lush garden landscape. I enjoy this style of poetry a little better than the traditional three line 5-7-5. The first two lines are like a diving board, setting up the poem. My best to you and in the contest. I hope you are well and good.
Sally :+)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thank you Sally for popping in to review my short poem. I really appreciate it. ~DD
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written five-line poem. When we can have our own private garden where we can go to spend time with our memories and recall moments that long past.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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A very well-written five-line poem. When we can have our own private garden where we can go to spend time with our memories and recall moments that long past.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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Sandra - Thank you for your review. Your comments are appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Aussie
A truly beautiful display of flowers. Memories are made of this. Each bloom holds a memory and every one after it. I loved your poem and best wishes in the 5 line poem contest. Happy Christmas.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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A truly beautiful display of flowers. Memories are made of this. Each bloom holds a memory and every one after it. I loved your poem and best wishes in the 5 line poem contest. Happy Christmas.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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K, thank you for your thoughtful and understanding review on my 5 line poem. I always appreciated your comments. ~DDx
Comment from Irish Rain
So beautiful Miss Dd!
'kept fresh as loving blooms'...this phrase is perfection, combined with that glorious picture!
A wonderful entry!
Good luck,
Blessings...
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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So beautiful Miss Dd!
'kept fresh as loving blooms'...this phrase is perfection, combined with that glorious picture!
A wonderful entry!
Good luck,
Blessings...
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Irish Rain, thank you for your kind review. It is much appreciated. ~DD
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You're welcome Miss DD!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello PoemsOfDD
Thank you so much for me putting such a beautiful image in my mind of the colorful garden that you show in (I take it that is your own art) has perfect syllable count in each of the five lines.
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Hello PoemsOfDD
Thank you so much for me putting such a beautiful image in my mind of the colorful garden that you show in (I take it that is your own art) has perfect syllable count in each of the five lines.
Gert
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thank you Gert for your thoughtful review on my 5 line poem. Yes, the image is so beautiful. I wish I could experience sitting there for real. Warm blessings to you. ~DD
Comment from lyenochka
What a gorgeous picture - I guess of wisteria? It must be so fragrant. I like your metaphor of garden for the place where we can go to relive and enjoy good memories. I like the moments described as fresh "loving blooms."
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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What a gorgeous picture - I guess of wisteria? It must be so fragrant. I like your metaphor of garden for the place where we can go to relive and enjoy good memories. I like the moments described as fresh "loving blooms."
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thank you Helen for taking the time to review my 5 line poem. As always, I very much appreciate it. ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely 5-line poem. It resonates with me as I'm a gardener and sentimental. Memories (good ones ~ LOL) are treasured. I like your analogy to fresh blooms. I'm wondering, though, if it would be "past" or "passed." It seems either may work in that spot. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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This is a lovely 5-line poem. It resonates with me as I'm a gardener and sentimental. Memories (good ones ~ LOL) are treasured. I like your analogy to fresh blooms. I'm wondering, though, if it would be "past" or "passed." It seems either may work in that spot. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your thoughtful review on my five line poem Marilyn. As always, I appreciate your comments. ~DD
Comment from RodG
As we get older our memory garden changes from literal photo albums to the memories in our brains. The latter are harder to bring back. I like how the Speaker refers to her fondest memories as "loving blooms."
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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As we get older our memory garden changes from literal photo albums to the memories in our brains. The latter are harder to bring back. I like how the Speaker refers to her fondest memories as "loving blooms."
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thank you RodG for taking the time to review my 5 line poem. Your comments are much appreciated. ~DD
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from Pam (respa)
-That is quite a garden, DD!
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the mood and imagery
of you poem as you smile
at the long ago memories.
-I like the comparison of those
to the "loving blooms."
-A very nice ending to the poem.
-Good luck in the contest, and have
a wonderful holiday season and
great New Year!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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-That is quite a garden, DD!
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the mood and imagery
of you poem as you smile
at the long ago memories.
-I like the comparison of those
to the "loving blooms."
-A very nice ending to the poem.
-Good luck in the contest, and have
a wonderful holiday season and
great New Year!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thank you Pam. It?s always a welcomed pleasure to receive your reviews. Your comments are much appreciated. ~DD
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You are welcome, DD.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is very beautiful, DD. Not only does the stunning photography set the reader up for a flowery verse, your poem pivots from fond memories to love as a blooming thing. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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This is very beautiful, DD. Not only does the stunning photography set the reader up for a flowery verse, your poem pivots from fond memories to love as a blooming thing. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thank you Melissa for your thoughtful review. As always, your comments are very much appreciated. ~DD
