Wondering why
Damn. Must be broken again.21 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Yes, technology is befuddling. I still try to use my old ten year old laptop screen as if it were a touchscreen. Good job using all the syllables to show us a fun story.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Lol. Yes, technology is befuddling. I still try to use my old ten year old laptop screen as if it were a touchscreen. Good job using all the syllables to show us a fun story.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thank Helen for your great review.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, and a little sad, the signs of old age, and hopefully nothing else? this wonderful five-line poem asks many questions from the reader, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Excellent, and a little sad, the signs of old age, and hopefully nothing else? this wonderful five-line poem asks many questions from the reader, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Many thanls for your great review. Jen.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the confusionn when we have too many devices that need a remote control to be turned on and we can become easily distracted and use the wrong remote for the wrong device.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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A very well-written poem about the confusionn when we have too many devices that need a remote control to be turned on and we can become easily distracted and use the wrong remote for the wrong device.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Many thanks Sandra
Comment from country ranch writer
OOPS1We all have those forgetful moments. As we get older things tend to get forgotten where we put things and when we walk into a room what the heck we came in there for. Yup, its called old age.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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OOPS1We all have those forgetful moments. As we get older things tend to get forgotten where we put things and when we walk into a room what the heck we came in there for. Yup, its called old age.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Too right. Thanks for the review
Comment from AdaJulie
I read and I enjoy what I read, that's all I need so I can write a review. Reading can be just like peeling an onion. There will be layers after layers of meaning. Each reading can provide new insights. If possible, I would read this over and over to find each layer of enjoyment, each layer of meaning and talent. Well done
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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I read and I enjoy what I read, that's all I need so I can write a review. Reading can be just like peeling an onion. There will be layers after layers of meaning. Each reading can provide new insights. If possible, I would read this over and over to find each layer of enjoyment, each layer of meaning and talent. Well done
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your review. Jen.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile and this sort of thing happens all the time to me, I have a remote for the fans too and all these remotes can get confused, but I don't have a TV! He he he, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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He he he, this made me smile and this sort of thing happens all the time to me, I have a remote for the fans too and all these remotes can get confused, but I don't have a TV! He he he, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Many thanks Dolly. Glad you liked it. Love. Jen. X
Comment from Connie Frazier
HaHaHa :) A lot said here in a simple poem. Unfortunately, I can relate. I like how the first two lines build interest. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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HaHaHa :) A lot said here in a simple poem. Unfortunately, I can relate. I like how the first two lines build interest. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thanks Connie, so glad you liked it. Jen.
Comment from patcelaw
This gave me a chuckle as I have been known to do such things. May you have a blessed day and a very Merry Christmas. Patricia
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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This gave me a chuckle as I have been known to do such things. May you have a blessed day and a very Merry Christmas. Patricia
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Many thanks, same to you Patricia.
Comment from Rickie1
Jen
I read the reviews before posting. Yes it is nonsense, good funny nonsense. It's about the our human frailty that we all recognize and find humor in. Their not limited to remote controls. Well done.
Rickie
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Jen
I read the reviews before posting. Yes it is nonsense, good funny nonsense. It's about the our human frailty that we all recognize and find humor in. Their not limited to remote controls. Well done.
Rickie
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Many thanks Rickie, so glad you liked it. Jen. X
Comment from Sugarray77
This is such a funny poem. The words flow beautifully and present the reader with a glimpse of the frustration we all face when we pick up the wrong remote and do not realize it. Haha. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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This is such a funny poem. The words flow beautifully and present the reader with a glimpse of the frustration we all face when we pick up the wrong remote and do not realize it. Haha. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thanks so much Melissa. So glad you liked it. Jen. X
