Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Well this is funny and I'm not loin...oops lion
Could be a punny I'd hyphenate ...a-punny
I love the plea ...
Well,penned and good luck
God bless

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Hi kiwijenny Many thanks for looking in on this lim (erick) A bit of fun with the pun for the contest.LOL. iI will wait and see need the money Cheers

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

hi KiwiJenny Just to let you know The Lion won tonight Funny money?s mine Ha Ha Cheers Christine

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

I think I just might know who this is....but, whether that's the case or not, this is really a fun and even delightful offering for the contest! :) ;) I've always loved the limerick for a teaching tool (they're great for math for upper elem and junior high)! :) Kudos for pandering in a very clear and non-clandestine manner...it just might pay off! :) LOL!! :) :)

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Hi Y M Rogers I wonder if you are right LOL I find limericks fun to do and yes they do have different structures I hooe it may make up the money spent on it Ha Ha Cheers

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

hi Y M Rogers Just to let you know The Lion wibs tonight The funny money in my bank Ha Ha Cheers Christine

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are funny, creative and interesting.
I can't imagine a Lion Smiling! The artwork is perfect.
It compliments both the theme and words of this poem.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Hi Harmony13 Thanks heaps for looking at this and for your encouraging comments Yes I thought this lion image was appropriate LOL Cheers

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

hi Harmony13 Just to let you know The Lion wins tonight The funny money?s mine Ha Ha Cheers Christine

Comment from RodG

Good

I know some people do not regard PUNS as true humor, but I do. However, the word PUNNY does not work for me in this limerick. Still, Iwish you well in the contest.

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 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Hi RodG, Thanks for your review and stars I did take your comments on board and rearranged the line maybe it may be better LOL . There is not much choice to rhyme with funny or money This was the best I could come up with I dont expect to win or place but had a go anyaway. Appreciate your time Cheers

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

Hi RodG Just to ket you know The Lion wins the funny money tonight Ha Ha Cheers Christine

reply by RodG on 18-Dec-2018

That?s super! Obviously, ?punny? worked for many voters. Congratulations, Chrissy.

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

ha Ha Yes but I did revise that line after your review So maybe it read a bit better Cheers Christine

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Love it!! - who wouldn't agree with those poetic sentiments delivered in a nutshell Limerick, so to speak ! and with the added hint of humour and a lovely pic !

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Hi Zanya, Thank ypu Ha Ha well why not just got stright to the horses mouth and makecthe contest the subject had fun doing this one a spur of the moment think up Cheers

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

Hi Zanya Just to let you know The Lion wins the funny money tonight Ha Ha Cheers Christine

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Dear Anonymous Author,

Isn't that why most of us enter any contest? It isn't about the writing at all - its all about the funny money.

No, not really - but sometimes it does come across that way.

I wish you luck,

~MP~

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 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Hi Mustang Patty, Thank you but No it is all about the money Ha Ha This site costs me a fortune so to win the funny money is the aim LOL. No just to have fun win lose or draw is what I do sometimes I just cant help myself. I cannot review enough or win enough contests to promote my work ( never to the top) so I justify my average spend of $60- $ 90 proper dollars a week on the fact that I still work therefore it is my hard earned money I spend on my hobby. But I love being here and meeting everyone and have such lovely support anyway Cheers for your luck

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

Hi Mustang Patty Hust to let you know The Lion wibs the funny money Tonight Ha Ha Cheers Christine