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Comment from Liz (VAP)
I enjoy the authors work. She writes with feeling, and emotion.
The authors has something that is within which is troubling her.One wonder what it can be?
She should discuss her problem with a social Worker. The first verse is so touching. She is expressing what is going on in her life in words.
Have faith ,and Trust God. You will over come whatever, is on you mind.
Have faith and trust the
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I enjoy the authors work. She writes with feeling, and emotion.
The authors has something that is within which is troubling her.One wonder what it can be?
She should discuss her problem with a social Worker. The first verse is so touching. She is expressing what is going on in her life in words.
Have faith ,and Trust God. You will over come whatever, is on you mind.
Have faith and trust the
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
Comment from tempeste
Mr.Trump and his wall make me sick .. America over the decades has gone around so called defended the rights of oppressed people but we all know that America 's economics has always thrives on wars so I wonder really what true motives were /are behind America's "help" : to save innocent people suffering and defend their rights or for personal gain of power and wealth.
Maquin's father was trying to get to America the land of opportunity .. To offer a better life to his daughter and family but instead Trump doesn't want these people ...they are a burden and a little girl of seven paid the highest price..
When I see the lavish life he and his family live it makes me sick ..
I have nothing against Barron Trump actually I feel sorry for him ..
He grew up as a child in a unnatural environment in a golden palace where his mother washed him in caviar while kids like Jakelin Caal Macquin have nothing and are dying..
This wall Trump wants to build will cost 8 billion dollars ..money wasted...I can think of a more profitable way to spend that money.
I suggest Trump offers financial support to a poor country like Messico ..build schools, hospitals, roads , boost their economy , create jobs ....so that people won't need to leave their country anymore.
America will benefit in many ways too if Messico thrives.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Mr.Trump and his wall make me sick .. America over the decades has gone around so called defended the rights of oppressed people but we all know that America 's economics has always thrives on wars so I wonder really what true motives were /are behind America's "help" : to save innocent people suffering and defend their rights or for personal gain of power and wealth.
Maquin's father was trying to get to America the land of opportunity .. To offer a better life to his daughter and family but instead Trump doesn't want these people ...they are a burden and a little girl of seven paid the highest price..
When I see the lavish life he and his family live it makes me sick ..
I have nothing against Barron Trump actually I feel sorry for him ..
He grew up as a child in a unnatural environment in a golden palace where his mother washed him in caviar while kids like Jakelin Caal Macquin have nothing and are dying..
This wall Trump wants to build will cost 8 billion dollars ..money wasted...I can think of a more profitable way to spend that money.
I suggest Trump offers financial support to a poor country like Messico ..build schools, hospitals, roads , boost their economy , create jobs ....so that people won't need to leave their country anymore.
America will benefit in many ways too if Messico thrives.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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CIAO FRANCA: We share the same feelings concerning the walls. Perhaps we have need to post your review on bill boards all over our world. Just the way you posted it here. I believe that we would experience a more pleasurable and peaceful way of life here on earth....if people take heed to your message here. God bless you. Ciao, Franka. Your friend: rhonnie69.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your interpretation of Jakelin's story. It is horrible what is happening at the border. We all need to pray for these families that are only trying to get here to start a new life. (Just as generations of people have for years.)
~patty~
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your interpretation of Jakelin's story. It is horrible what is happening at the border. We all need to pray for these families that are only trying to get here to start a new life. (Just as generations of people have for years.)
~patty~
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
Comment from Randa Dayle
Wow, what a sad situation. I feel your pain.
But as you know that Jesus is the one who can heal your pain. Thanks for sharing this sad story!! Great writing!
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Wow, what a sad situation. I feel your pain.
But as you know that Jesus is the one who can heal your pain. Thanks for sharing this sad story!! Great writing!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
Comment from light
Sad story, well written. It is hard to know how to feel and what to say. yeshua, Jesus said. "the prudent will be silent in those days." This doesn't mean we can't express our feelings. These are hard times.
Elaine
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Sad story, well written. It is hard to know how to feel and what to say. yeshua, Jesus said. "the prudent will be silent in those days." This doesn't mean we can't express our feelings. These are hard times.
Elaine
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
Comment from Coco Jane
Sad and thought-provoking. I like the contrast of the thirst vs. the tasty drink. We all thirst. How are we providing--or dumping--life-giving water to others? Really makes ya think.
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Sad and thought-provoking. I like the contrast of the thirst vs. the tasty drink. We all thirst. How are we providing--or dumping--life-giving water to others? Really makes ya think.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
Comment from 24chas
This was really a powerful piece of writing, Rhonnie 69. I can appreciate your faith coming through in this one and hope the little girl is in a better place now. Well done.
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This was really a powerful piece of writing, Rhonnie 69. I can appreciate your faith coming through in this one and hope the little girl is in a better place now. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
Comment from kiwijenny
Poor little girl died of sepsis shock . I don't know how her father must be feeling. He left Guatemala for a better life..
I love that you thank Jesus. She has a better eternal life. Thank you Jesus
God bless
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Poor little girl died of sepsis shock . I don't know how her father must be feeling. He left Guatemala for a better life..
I love that you thank Jesus. She has a better eternal life. Thank you Jesus
God bless
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
Comment from QC Poet
The father was said to not voiced any concerns and praised the efforts of CBP and had many opportunities to do so. Unbelievable, People's treatment is as if they are animals, herding them and cages included. God help us all for we're losing our humanity and brotherly love.
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The father was said to not voiced any concerns and praised the efforts of CBP and had many opportunities to do so. Unbelievable, People's treatment is as if they are animals, herding them and cages included. God help us all for we're losing our humanity and brotherly love.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a fine tribute to your daughter. I truly like reading how with the trial and tribulations Jesus is there to take care of our needs. Praise be to Almighty God. Shirley
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What a fine tribute to your daughter. I truly like reading how with the trial and tribulations Jesus is there to take care of our needs. Praise be to Almighty God. Shirley
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
