Oblivion Calling
Rock Ballad [Lyrics About Addiction Contest Entry]25 total reviews
Comment from royowen
This is wonderful write Yvette, I'm so glad that my grandchildren are being raised by "sober" parents, secure, loving environment is what every child needs, and indeed deserves, their innocence is sublimely precious. I enjoyed highly emotive expose' of the hell of addiction, it's a incredible work dear Yvette, well done, blessjngs, Roy
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This is wonderful write Yvette, I'm so glad that my grandchildren are being raised by "sober" parents, secure, loving environment is what every child needs, and indeed deserves, their innocence is sublimely precious. I enjoyed highly emotive expose' of the hell of addiction, it's a incredible work dear Yvette, well done, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx for stopping by, Roy, and I'm glad the lyrics worked for you -- I absolutely love the lyric competitions...they get to that little part of me from 'waaaay back when' when I actually wanted to be a songwriter! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful evening! :) :) Yvette
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I went from songwriter to poet. Both similar Heh Heh
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Addiction has to be the worst illness possible, and it's hard to break. It doesn't matter what the addiction is. These lyrics are really good, I had my own tune going for the words and it was really bouncy. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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Addiction has to be the worst illness possible, and it's hard to break. It doesn't matter what the addiction is. These lyrics are really good, I had my own tune going for the words and it was really bouncy. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx for stopping by, Sandra, and I'm so glad the lyrics worked for you -- I absolutely love the lyric competitions...they get to that little part of me from 'waaaay back when' when I actually wanted to be a songwriter! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful evening! :) :)
Comment from Bill Schott
These lyrics, Oblivion Calling, are known best by those affected by that undeniable urge to find and keep the feeling of nothingness going all the time. Lots of family with issues and experience with the delicious taste of nothing.
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These lyrics, Oblivion Calling, are known best by those affected by that undeniable urge to find and keep the feeling of nothingness going all the time. Lots of family with issues and experience with the delicious taste of nothing.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx for stopping by, Bill, and I'm so glad the lyrics worked for you -- I absolutely love the lyric competitions...they get to that little part of me from 'waaaay back when' when I actually wanted to be a songwriter! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful evening! :) :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello W.M.Roger
Your Rock Ballad [Lyrics About Addiction Contest Entry] with out any doubt is very good and I read your authors note and I can see why you wrote this Ballad. Gert
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Hello W.M.Roger
Your Rock Ballad [Lyrics About Addiction Contest Entry] with out any doubt is very good and I read your authors note and I can see why you wrote this Ballad. Gert
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx for stopping by, Gert, and I'm glad the lyrics worked for you -- I absolutely love the lyric competitions...they get to that little part of me from 'waaaay back when' when I actually wanted to be a songwriter! :) ;) I only put the source of the image in my author notes so, perhaps you're talking about the unusually long 'contest definition' that really seems to only be the lyrics to some song.....???? There really was nothing posted but those words and they kindof 'run off' at the end......?? :) :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful evening! :) :)
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You are welcome Y. M. Roger all I know that I don't have any idea how to write a ballad, and you to me just gave me good example of how a ballad should be done
Gert
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LOL! just remember, it's not a 'true ballad' as they define in the poetry world as an official ballad poem has set meters/rhymes/etc that don't apply to the world of rock-n-roll! :) ;) This one is aimed at sounding good with some 'metal' behind it (heavy guitars and drums) and really getting to that emotional well we all have! :) ;) Thanx, Gert, I do so enjoy chatting with you -- take care out there! :) :) Yvette
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You are welcome W.M.Roger what ever it is all I know is I like it Gert
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Thanx, Gert...I just know there are many trained poets on this sight that tend to get a little 'bent out of shape' with the wrong usage of technical poetry language so, I just didn't want to over-step any boundaries or step on any toes. :) :) ;) :P :P LOL!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It seems that no matter how much you fight it, you cannot help falling into oblivion here in your song of the spiralling drug cycle, not many addicts are able to life themselves out of it, a poignant write Yvette, love Dolly x
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It seems that no matter how much you fight it, you cannot help falling into oblivion here in your song of the spiralling drug cycle, not many addicts are able to life themselves out of it, a poignant write Yvette, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx for stopping by, Dolly, and I'm so glad the lyrics worked for you -- I absolutely love the lyric competitions...they get to that little part of me from 'waaaay back when' when I actually wanted to be a songwriter! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful evening! :) :)
