Wondering
A simple puzzlement by chance41 total reviews
Comment from gsuarez
Even though I believe life is more than the rolling of dice or the spinning of a wheel or even riding on the winds of fate, your words ring a gorgeous tone. Thank you for this brief jaunt on, "The Meaning of Life."
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Even though I believe life is more than the rolling of dice or the spinning of a wheel or even riding on the winds of fate, your words ring a gorgeous tone. Thank you for this brief jaunt on, "The Meaning of Life."
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Great to meet you gsuarez and hope to see you again soon. With sincere thanks for your fine review and stars! HIS GRAYNESS: VANCE
Comment from Earl Corp
The font color on that color background made it so difficult to read that I couldn't really rate this piece of work. You may consider changing it to something easirt to dechiper.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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The font color on that color background made it so difficult to read that I couldn't really rate this piece of work. You may consider changing it to something easirt to dechiper.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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THANKS EARL, OTHERS HAVE REMARKED AS WELL ON THE BAD COLOR. i WILL NOT USE IT AGAIN! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your reflections--I liked your characterizing them as a riddle. I especially admired your "slippery rain of chance" image and "dice" metaphor. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thank you for sharing your reflections--I liked your characterizing them as a riddle. I especially admired your "slippery rain of chance" image and "dice" metaphor. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thank you Joan it is always a delight to hear from you and always appreciate your contributions to this site in all ways! Vance
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Many thanks for your warmhearted and encouraging response. Have a peaceful Sunday- Joan
Comment from Gloria ....
This has a fine cadence, Vance. I love the fast paced motion and flow of the wording as you move from question to question oscillating between chance and commitment.
Just make sure the dice aren't weighted as that might rig the chance somewhat. lol.
Really enjoyed this prose poem. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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This has a fine cadence, Vance. I love the fast paced motion and flow of the wording as you move from question to question oscillating between chance and commitment.
Just make sure the dice aren't weighted as that might rig the chance somewhat. lol.
Really enjoyed this prose poem. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanks so much for your fine review's so sincerely appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from SLMorrical
This is good. The flow is great. Sometimes even a good intention is for a selfish reason. I can see why you are ranked at #7. Well done. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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This is good. The flow is great. Sometimes even a good intention is for a selfish reason. I can see why you are ranked at #7. Well done. Keep writing.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanks so much for your very delightful and generous review, so much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from tfawcus
Good to read another of your poems, Vance. Puzzling why you didn't lay it out as such? Of course it may just be that the lines have become merged on my iPhone. Some interesting thoughts here. Life can be quite a conundrum!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Good to read another of your poems, Vance. Puzzling why you didn't lay it out as such? Of course it may just be that the lines have become merged on my iPhone. Some interesting thoughts here. Life can be quite a conundrum!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanks so much, so sincerely indeed, Tony, for your great review and generous stars so sincerely appreciated! Vance
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Read! The author's words are interesting, creative
and thought provoking. The reader pondered on these words and
thought about a book she is reading on living with uncertainty.
The poem flows and connects well. I found this poem with words
to reflect on.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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Excellent Read! The author's words are interesting, creative
and thought provoking. The reader pondered on these words and
thought about a book she is reading on living with uncertainty.
The poem flows and connects well. I found this poem with words
to reflect on.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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Thank you sincerely harmony, for your lovely review and generous stars, so sincerely appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; vance
Comment from Ricky1024
Well written Grayness with your own, personal, touch.
Adjective and objective contents were both Exceptional.
Grammar perfect and flow, too.
Theme and Imagery Exceptional.
Descriptive Measures aligned, perfectly.
Doctor
Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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Well written Grayness with your own, personal, touch.
Adjective and objective contents were both Exceptional.
Grammar perfect and flow, too.
Theme and Imagery Exceptional.
Descriptive Measures aligned, perfectly.
Doctor
Ricky 1024
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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Hi Ricky 1024 and thanks so very' very much for your wonderful review and very generous stars! so sincerely appreciated! your friend always! Vance
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a good verse that mirrors your self reflection. I philosophical look at how we approach things and the decisions we make. Great job on this free verse.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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This is a good verse that mirrors your self reflection. I philosophical look at how we approach things and the decisions we make. Great job on this free verse.
Melissa
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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Bless you and thank you sincerely for your wonderful review and generous stars so sincerely appreciated VANCE
Comment from apky
You've imparted so much wisdom in this piece, Vance.
Very thought-provoking and full of lessons we need to learn as well as keep alive within us. I certainly came away with a lot from you beautiful piece.
All the best for the festive season!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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You've imparted so much wisdom in this piece, Vance.
Very thought-provoking and full of lessons we need to learn as well as keep alive within us. I certainly came away with a lot from you beautiful piece.
All the best for the festive season!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thanks so much dear apky for your lovely review and generous stars, so sincerely appreciated! Vance
