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Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Scene on an Empty Street"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from lyenochka
Hmm. This Pez character is one to watch out for. One would think Pallas would have figured out something by now. Funny, how moms can be about their sons' dates.
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Hmm. This Pez character is one to watch out for. One would think Pallas would have figured out something by now. Funny, how moms can be about their sons' dates.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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I lived with five brothers and sisters and never knew anything about them.
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Five total siblings? Or ten? Either it's pretty big.
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice picture to portray coins and nice work up for the script when we find out who took the coins after all and everyone else got blamed for.
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Nice picture to portray coins and nice work up for the script when we find out who took the coins after all and everyone else got blamed for.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanks, CRW
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Smiles
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah, well, apparently Pez knew where his mother had those old coins stashed.
I guess Ma accused everyone but the right one.
Hey, it happens that way sometimes.
~Dean
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Hah, well, apparently Pez knew where his mother had those old coins stashed.
I guess Ma accused everyone but the right one.
Hey, it happens that way sometimes.
~Dean
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Pez reminds me of my brother. He was the fair-haired boy who could do no wrong (that you could prove or believe was possible).
Comment from kiwijenny
I guess Pez stole the coins...he sure knew a lot about them.
Cool writing it kept me intrigued...but to be honest I nearly skipped it...Scene on an Empty Street doesn't grab the reader...Coin a better phrase I say.
God bless
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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I guess Pez stole the coins...he sure knew a lot about them.
Cool writing it kept me intrigued...but to be honest I nearly skipped it...Scene on an Empty Street doesn't grab the reader...Coin a better phrase I say.
God bless
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
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Pez and Pallas Pee in the Street (?)
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Yep Peeing in the Street is always good. Lol
Comment from damommy
Of course, I liked the choice of name for the Catholic girl. 8-)
Pez must have stolen the coins since he knew were they were. Your scripts are always amusing.
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Of course, I liked the choice of name for the Catholic girl. 8-)
Pez must have stolen the coins since he knew were they were. Your scripts are always amusing.
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanks, da
