The Crime Before Christmas
A Dynamic Duo, BOO ghost and Sally Law31 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
So who was the perpetrator of this terrible crime. I have to say I was not unduly frightened, more amused by this scary tale. One piece of unforgivable SPAG I must bring to your attention.
"Who could of done this?" It may sound like that when spoken but it should be written "Who could (of) have done this?"
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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So who was the perpetrator of this terrible crime. I have to say I was not unduly frightened, more amused by this scary tale. One piece of unforgivable SPAG I must bring to your attention.
"Who could of done this?" It may sound like that when spoken but it should be written "Who could (of) have done this?"
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for stopping by with a review. I did this in response to an invite from Boo. I am not a horror writer, as I have had enough real horror in my life. I fixed the unforgivable, hopefully, I am now forgiven. That?s what I get for writing this in a record 15 minutes. Oh wel...
All my best,
Sally
