Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

Love everything about this, especially the message. This is also a very eye-appealing entry. As always, a beautiful presentation, making your writing stand out. I wish you the very best in the contest!!!

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very cute and so innocent
what an honor to read the words to make this come to life
I felt you have had so much talent
and you draw ones in
I really enjoyed this writing
I like the photo
i hope you do well in the contest
donette1914 dec 13th 2018

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

Comment from jmshumate

Excellent

This is a humorous poem if I'm taking it right. You follow the structure well, 5/7/5 . Is this saying something like it's cute when babies lie, " I didn't eat the chocolate cake" with chocolate all over their face? Those lies get bigger. As a young teenager I remember smoking cigarette butts and playing with fire with my buddy across the street. My mother asked if I was playing with matches, which I denied, meanwhile as I was standing there in front of her my shoe lace was smoldering. Yikes! She did find it too funny ! Good job on this.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018