Comment from nomi338

Excellent

This type of thing does happen at funerals. At this point in time, it is a useless process. The man is dead allow him to rest in whatever state he will rest in. Who fathered who is a, if you will, dead matter. Let it go and move on. Good write.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018

Thanks, nomi

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Funny story in this script. Sounds like one of the Indiana towns near where I live, Montezuma. Apparently the favorite word there isn't Hoosier but Who's your father? Aunty did indeed get around. Funeral seems an unlikely setting, but I'm sure lots of secrets get revealed at those occasions. judi

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018

Based on a true story.

reply by judiverse on 14-Dec-2018

All in the family, apparently. judi

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

My word, Bill, this revelation would surely awaken the local community from their slumber. Yeah, who would have thought! I loved it. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018

Thanks, Ulla.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

A most entertaining script, Bill. Sounds like it might've been a little bit too close to all in the family.

Great dialogue and back and forth.

Much enjoyed. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018

Thanks, Gloria

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Oh my! LOL! What a shocker! Pez was doin his aunt? And he just admitted it to Pallas. I'm in shock, really. Last thing I expected. Wow. You did the impossible--you surprised me. Congratulations. :)

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018

So happy I could give you a memorable read, Phyllis.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Nice twist at the end, the old redneck axiom going to the family reunion to meet women. This was entertaining and sounds like it could be a Hee Haw skit. Nice job.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018

Thanks, Earl

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Sounds as if Aunty got around a lot, but didn't believe in birth control. Last line wraps up the story pretty well. Good job with dialogue. Marilyn

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018

Thanks, Marilyn.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Oh, have mercy, Bill, heh-heh!
Kissin' cousins...yeah, I heard tell about them a time er two.
Here in Redneckville, Ohio, incest is pretty common, I'm ashamed to tell.
My cousin tried to kiss me once.
I popped him right in the snout!
Now he works as a Drag Queen down in Soho somewhere.
Funny stuff, my fiend friend.
~Dean

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018

Based on a true story.

reply by Dean Kuch on 13-Dec-2018

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL!! Do you think she looks like me!!! What a wonderful ending, and they were quiet for the rest of the service, lol! I loved this one, so funny. Well done!! :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018

Thanks, Sandra

Comment from Carolyn Reaves

Excellent

This sounds like a conversation that could have really happened. i liked your ending. Kind of humorous. Keep writing. I wasn't sure how this one was going to end.

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 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018

Based on a supposedly true story.