When Cancer Wins
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Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon
Sad but so often true.
A very clever piece this - the pun (albeit morbid) is accurate and notable. I am not too sure if writing the all is upper case works? Have you tried it in lower-case? Obviously it is your call, but there is an association made (rightly or wrongly) between capital letters and 'shouting'.
Still, a small point and I wish you well with this piece.
cheers
phill
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Hello Anon
Sad but so often true.
A very clever piece this - the pun (albeit morbid) is accurate and notable. I am not too sure if writing the all is upper case works? Have you tried it in lower-case? Obviously it is your call, but there is an association made (rightly or wrongly) between capital letters and 'shouting'.
Still, a small point and I wish you well with this piece.
cheers
phill
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thank you, noted and agreed, many thanks
