O, Come With Me
A Triolet13 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
Triolets are good poems for single messages, emphasized. I think this one should do well in the contest. Another form where choice of repeating lines is critical...
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Triolets are good poems for single messages, emphasized. I think this one should do well in the contest. Another form where choice of repeating lines is critical...
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a nicely composed and illustrated Triolet. Upbeat and happy theme with good flow and flow. Good luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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This is a nicely composed and illustrated Triolet. Upbeat and happy theme with good flow and flow. Good luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
Lovely triolet.
Rich in emotive imagery. It beckons, yet it is not maudlin. In invites, yet it is not pushy or arrogant. Lines flow well and envelop the reader. Well-executed!
Best Wishes,
diane
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Hello!
Lovely triolet.
Rich in emotive imagery. It beckons, yet it is not maudlin. In invites, yet it is not pushy or arrogant. Lines flow well and envelop the reader. Well-executed!
Best Wishes,
diane
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thank you for this great review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great triolet, Mystery Author. I love the picture you paired with your well thought out words. Those words flow smoothly with great rhymes and an even greater message. I like that the way you address the reader. I enjoyed reading this. Great job and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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This is a great triolet, Mystery Author. I love the picture you paired with your well thought out words. Those words flow smoothly with great rhymes and an even greater message. I like that the way you address the reader. I enjoyed reading this. Great job and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much. Truly appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked the mood of this poem and the sentiments of enjoying life and facing the challenges head on, encouraging and uplifting poetry, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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I liked the mood of this poem and the sentiments of enjoying life and facing the challenges head on, encouraging and uplifting poetry, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a REALLY lovely triolet. Your choices of words and phrases
are very effective. Perhaps one change would be good--just an
opinion, of course:-): placing quotation marks around
"We two are one's." I say this only because I stumbled on that line.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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This is a REALLY lovely triolet. Your choices of words and phrases
are very effective. Perhaps one change would be good--just an
opinion, of course:-): placing quotation marks around
"We two are one's." I say this only because I stumbled on that line.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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I'll take another look. Thank you so much.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Triolet with a romantic message to a lover that he must come with you and take a chance in front of the world and look them in the eye.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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A very well-written Triolet with a romantic message to a lover that he must come with you and take a chance in front of the world and look them in the eye.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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You got it, Sandra. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from fm wright
A very positive Triolet. Certainly follows form. The topic stays on course, and I like the strong, descriptive words you've chosen. The artwork goes well with this piece, making a nice addition to what you are expressing. Best of wishes with this entry!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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A very positive Triolet. Certainly follows form. The topic stays on course, and I like the strong, descriptive words you've chosen. The artwork goes well with this piece, making a nice addition to what you are expressing. Best of wishes with this entry!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much.
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You are so welcome!
Comment from zlp22
Very interesting, almost like a song. Good color and the type of writing make the words stand out. That type of poem is not easy to write. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Very interesting, almost like a song. Good color and the type of writing make the words stand out. That type of poem is not easy to write. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Poet,
Thank you for sharing this beautiful triolet. Your poem is well formed and technically correct within the constraints of the poetic form, and it has a beautiful message.
I wish you luck in the contest,
~MP~
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Dear Anonymous Poet,
Thank you for sharing this beautiful triolet. Your poem is well formed and technically correct within the constraints of the poetic form, and it has a beautiful message.
I wish you luck in the contest,
~MP~
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thank you, Patty. Appreciate that.
