Spooks
We owe them but we may never know them.3 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Ciao, Amica Mia, I'm sorry I have no sixes left, you did a fantastic job on your first Triolet poem. I'm going to take your word for it the format is correct, I am still recuperating from my exhausting day yesterday at the house auction, which I did not win:(( Good luck in the contest. ~Kerry
Ciao, Amica Mia, I'm sorry I have no sixes left, you did a fantastic job on your first Triolet poem. I'm going to take your word for it the format is correct, I am still recuperating from my exhausting day yesterday at the house auction, which I did not win:(( Good luck in the contest. ~Kerry
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting theme for a triolet. The repetition works well to remind us that the spies are always there and "always in disguise." It's timely considering how we have to be on guard about who can tap into our information.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
Interesting theme for a triolet. The repetition works well to remind us that the spies are always there and "always in disguise." It's timely considering how we have to be on guard about who can tap into our information.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
Thanks Iyenochka ( your username sound Russian) .
I had just finished binge watching Spooks and I thought it would be fun to write about this invisible world ..
When I was young I dreamt to become a spy 😅
Thank you for your positive review !
Comment from meeshu
I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and an intriguing look at the underworld of Spy vs. Spy. good luck to you..
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and an intriguing look at the underworld of Spy vs. Spy. good luck to you..
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Sorry Meeshu for the late reply..
Glad you liked the theme ..originally I had written it as a 2-2-5-7-5 ..but then I decided to add more lines .
I just finished binge watching the English series "Spooks" and I was inspired to write a poem about this dark /hidden world.