Sunshine Visions
A Triolet Contest Entry10 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This well-written triolet effectively conveys your gratefulness
and love for the sun's rays, enhancing the overall effect
with the inclusion of romance.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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This well-written triolet effectively conveys your gratefulness
and love for the sun's rays, enhancing the overall effect
with the inclusion of romance.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your review today, Janice -- I so appreciate your time in doing so! :) ;) Sending some sunshine visions your way to last through the weekend!! :) ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
To feel the sun on your face is heavenly and of course even in winter the sun shines and those bright days are wonderful, sun shining and clean fresh snow everywhere, your poem is warm and embracing, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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To feel the sun on your face is heavenly and of course even in winter the sun shines and those bright days are wonderful, sun shining and clean fresh snow everywhere, your poem is warm and embracing, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your review today, Dolly -- I so appreciate your time in doing so! :) ;) Sending some sunshine visions your way to last through the weekend!! :) ;)
Comment from Sugarray77
You have written a very lovely Triolet, Yvette. I like that you have a sunshine theme. Your use of a fresh faced young lady basking in the sun, lends a brightness to the entire verse. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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You have written a very lovely Triolet, Yvette. I like that you have a sunshine theme. Your use of a fresh faced young lady basking in the sun, lends a brightness to the entire verse. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your review, Melissa -- have a wonderful weekend ahead, ma'am!! :) ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Triolet in correct format and excellent rhyming. The repeating line is the correct choice. When we seek.warmth in the winter we seek the sun to warms us up.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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A very well-written Triolet in correct format and excellent rhyming. The repeating line is the correct choice. When we seek.warmth in the winter we seek the sun to warms us up.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your review, Sandra -- have a wonderful weekend ahead, ma'am!! :) ;)
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and yes the sun can achieve all this with its warmth it does make the moment and the world seem like a much friendlier place and so comforting, very well done with great artwork to support, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Excellent and yes the sun can achieve all this with its warmth it does make the moment and the world seem like a much friendlier place and so comforting, very well done with great artwork to support, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, kahpot -- so very much appreciated! :) ;) Happy holiday season and sunshine wishes from my little part of the world! :) :)
Comment from jmshumate
A nice poem you have written. You follow the format well and it show with a smooth flow of words. You have painted a nice picture for the reader, one that I felt today working outside in the cold Michigan air today. The sun came out for just a while and the feeling of warmth on my face it brought was pretty darn close to what you have described in this nice trioket! Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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A nice poem you have written. You follow the format well and it show with a smooth flow of words. You have painted a nice picture for the reader, one that I felt today working outside in the cold Michigan air today. The sun came out for just a while and the feeling of warmth on my face it brought was pretty darn close to what you have described in this nice trioket! Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, JM -- so very much appreciated! :) ;) Happy holiday season and sunshine wishes from my little part of the world! :) :)
Comment from meeshu
I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and feelings. it might be better without the space between stanzas, like the example. just a thought..
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and feelings. it might be better without the space between stanzas, like the example. just a thought..
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Never was much of a conformist or traditionalist....probably won't win, but I think I'll go with Ol' Blue Eyes on this one (his b-day was yesterday, btw!) and "Do it my way!" :) ;) :) Thanx for the read and review, dude -- so very much appreciated! :) ;) Happy holiday season and sunshine wishes from my little part of the world! :) :)
Comment from Galactia
Hi
This is an exvellent written triolet poem that you have composed.
Perfect 8 syllables across all lines. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Hi
This is an exvellent written triolet poem that you have composed.
Perfect 8 syllables across all lines. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Galactia -- so very much appreciated! :) ;) Happy holiday season and sunshine wishes from my little part of the world! :) :)
Comment from kiwijenny
Beautiful poetic form
Beautiful imagery
Feeling sun's warmth upon my face...I love that
I love to feel sun's warmth in winter because it's rare
God bless
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Beautiful poetic form
Beautiful imagery
Feeling sun's warmth upon my face...I love that
I love to feel sun's warmth in winter because it's rare
God bless
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Jenny -- so very much appreciated! :) ;) Happy holiday season and sunshine wishes from my little part of the world! :) :)
Comment from Earl Corp
I'm getting pretty impressed with the triolet poetry. This poem would have earned a six star rating if I had any left. It rhymes, it makes sense, and it invokes emotions within the reader.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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I'm getting pretty impressed with the triolet poetry. This poem would have earned a six star rating if I had any left. It rhymes, it makes sense, and it invokes emotions within the reader.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Earl -- so very much appreciated! :) ;) Happy holiday season and sunshine wishes from my little part of the world! :) :)
