Bullied
A tribute to all the people who have been bullied.65 total reviews
Comment from McMurry903
Great subject matter and delivery. Bullying is such a deep and needed topic. Good imagery and love the positive spin. I have two teenage kids and we talk often about this type of behavior and how to rise above.
Well Done!
-Brian
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Great subject matter and delivery. Bullying is such a deep and needed topic. Good imagery and love the positive spin. I have two teenage kids and we talk often about this type of behavior and how to rise above.
Well Done!
-Brian
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much. If I can ever have a positive effect through my writing it is positive proof to me that my writing is a gift from God, and I am using it in an approved way.
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Thank you so much. If I can ever have a positive effect through my writing it is positive proof to me that my writing is a gift from God, and I am using it in an approved way.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and a great message, bullying should never be accepted, but bravo to those who use it to their benefit, I know a Few that have and now still stand against it, very well written****kahpot
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Excellent and a great message, bullying should never be accepted, but bravo to those who use it to their benefit, I know a Few that have and now still stand against it, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your review comments. Bravo to anyone who is working to prevent bullying and all of its negative effects.
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Thank you for your review comments. Bravo to anyone who is working to prevent bullying and all of its negative effects.
Comment from Erin Lee
Being a victim of bullying myself I felt this. At school and sadly among family as well. Your words in a way look toward the person that we become after surviving these ordeals. Whether it's moving forward unscathed by life's hardships or showing an almost unnatural kindness to those around. Thank you for sharing your work
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Being a victim of bullying myself I felt this. At school and sadly among family as well. Your words in a way look toward the person that we become after surviving these ordeals. Whether it's moving forward unscathed by life's hardships or showing an almost unnatural kindness to those around. Thank you for sharing your work
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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To the many of us who are either bullied by people or harsh conditions of life, use those rocks as building blocks. Build a castle or a mansion or a fort. Something substantial that we can stand on and succeed.
Comment from Galactia
Hi
This is an exclent wrutten poem abouy being bullied and the buildimg blocks used fir self esteam and building yourself stronger.
Great job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Hi
This is an exclent wrutten poem abouy being bullied and the buildimg blocks used fir self esteam and building yourself stronger.
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you. We all can do it, we must not allow ourselves to be bullied into defeat.
Comment from rhonnie69
MERRY CHRISTMAS NOMI338: If I didn't, KNOW, that YOU wrote this poem, I would think that I wrote it describing myself. Yes. I am the kid with the depressed look on his face. Been there...been through that. That's why I can relate to your posting here. This is a sad but true story. But at the end of the day...I was a stand up guy. Thank you for sharing, Nomi338. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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MERRY CHRISTMAS NOMI338: If I didn't, KNOW, that YOU wrote this poem, I would think that I wrote it describing myself. Yes. I am the kid with the depressed look on his face. Been there...been through that. That's why I can relate to your posting here. This is a sad but true story. But at the end of the day...I was a stand up guy. Thank you for sharing, Nomi338. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much. As I stated, this poem is in honor for each of us who refused to stay down. Did we get knocked down, yes, knocked down, but not out.
Comment from meeshu
I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and a very positive message in this poem, nomi338..................meeshu
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I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and a very positive message in this poem, nomi338..................meeshu
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you. This poem is for every person male or female that got knocked down, but bounced right back up to our feet.
Comment from Nora Mehadi
Absolutely incredible! "I used those rocks as building blocks to build a dynasty". Those words were gravitating and inspirational. This poem made me feel so happy and confident! Would 100% recommend!
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Absolutely incredible! "I used those rocks as building blocks to build a dynasty". Those words were gravitating and inspirational. This poem made me feel so happy and confident! Would 100% recommend!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you. This could be a rallying cry. Thank you for the rocks, they are just what I needed to build my castle.
Comment from Sugarray77
I love the moral to your story and the encouragement it gives to the reader to not be cowed down, but by brains and hard work, succeed. Good photography supports this poem and adds depth. Well done.
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I love the moral to your story and the encouragement it gives to the reader to not be cowed down, but by brains and hard work, succeed. Good photography supports this poem and adds depth. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you. I thank all of my bullies for providing me with the rocks that serve as building blocks for my castle.
Comment from kiwijenny
My son is this way.he had rocks thrown at him and he sure used them to build with. He is a caring compassionate person because of it.
Beautifully done. I wish I had a six for it
God bless
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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My son is this way.he had rocks thrown at him and he sure used them to build with. He is a caring compassionate person because of it.
Beautifully done. I wish I had a six for it
God bless
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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Thank you, your wonderful words are worth more to me than a bagful of six stars.
Comment from zanya
The sentiments expressed here stir a feeling of hope in the face of this phenomenon of our times-bullying - the tone is feisty but built on using ones mental capacity to face this foe !
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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The sentiments expressed here stir a feeling of hope in the face of this phenomenon of our times-bullying - the tone is feisty but built on using ones mental capacity to face this foe !
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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Thank you. This applies to me directly
