How About A Kiss
A Tyburn 2-2-2-2-9-97 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This tyburn, How About a Kiss?, uses the correct formatting and reminds me of my first kiss with Linda. We were four. It was toothy grin meets dirty, snotty nose.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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This tyburn, How About a Kiss?, uses the correct formatting and reminds me of my first kiss with Linda. We were four. It was toothy grin meets dirty, snotty nose.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and share your insightful feedback!
Comment from Helena Frances
Good choice of picture to add to the poem's innocence and fun:)
You did a good job with this challenging format. Nice flow and it ends with a smile:)
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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Good choice of picture to add to the poem's innocence and fun:)
You did a good job with this challenging format. Nice flow and it ends with a smile:)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and share your insightful feedback!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Tyburns are hard, and I think this is an excellent contest entry. Well illustrated. Your spacing of the poem, color choice, artwork choice was all appealing. Your poem had a smooth read to it.
I wish you the very best in the contest. This is really good!
Blessings,
Gale
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Tyburns are hard, and I think this is an excellent contest entry. Well illustrated. Your spacing of the poem, color choice, artwork choice was all appealing. Your poem had a smooth read to it.
I wish you the very best in the contest. This is really good!
Blessings,
Gale
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate the positive feedback.
Comment from rama devi
Adorable entry with the closing twist of a missed kiss! Ha ha ha. Made me giggle. The picture is perfect. True to form, well p[resented and finely rhymed. Should prove a contender, I imagine...good luck!
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Adorable entry with the closing twist of a missed kiss! Ha ha ha. Made me giggle. The picture is perfect. True to form, well p[resented and finely rhymed. Should prove a contender, I imagine...good luck!
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this tyburn. Can be a challenge, but I enjoyed writing this one. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Awe... this is an adorable Tyburn poem, my friend. The sweet innocence of young love. lol. Wonderfully done! Best of luck to you! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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Awe... this is an adorable Tyburn poem, my friend. The sweet innocence of young love. lol. Wonderfully done! Best of luck to you! ~Kerry
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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Glad you enjoyed my little tyburn on young love!
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I did, lol :)))
Comment from fm wright
A very delightful poem. It follows the format for the Tyburn form. It flows well. I like the topic and even more I like the artwork you've chosen. I certainly wish you the best with this entry, as I found nothing I didn't like about it.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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A very delightful poem. It follows the format for the Tyburn form. It flows well. I like the topic and even more I like the artwork you've chosen. I certainly wish you the best with this entry, as I found nothing I didn't like about it.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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So glad you enjoyed my little tyburn!
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A truly wonderful read!
Comment from Earl Corp
This is a pretty neat form of poetry. I incorporates everything i like in a poem. It rhymes, it makes sense, and it entertains me. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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This is a pretty neat form of poetry. I incorporates everything i like in a poem. It rhymes, it makes sense, and it entertains me. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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So glad you enjoyed my little tyburn!
