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A collection of award winning poems

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Comment from Alyssa Reynoso-Morris
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I really enjoyed your poem. GREAT rhyming. It made me smile. I also like the sun. I am not a fan of the rain or snow. I know rain is important to fill our aquifers but I do not enjoy dealing with it on my way to work. Great work.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
    Thank you, I enjoyed writing it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work
Comment from Gert sherwood
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big smiles author your poem
What Makes Me Happy (contest) has super rhyme which made your entry so much fun to read. Gert

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
    Thank you Gert. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Dec-2018
    You are so welcome Earl Corp
    While ready your poem of what makes you happy,
    Thank you for inspiring me to write a poem what makes me Happy, question is would you like to read, if I post it
    Gert
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
    Sure post it and let me know
reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Dec-2018
    Thank you very much Earl Corp
    and I will let you know when I post it
    Gert
Comment from sunnilicious
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Great poem. It has a snappy rhythm that I like and understand. Sun and fun all day long... Creative. Well thought out. Nicely focused. Enjoyable to read. Good luck to you. Happy Holidays :)

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
    Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from djeckert
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well done. A nice homage to something you love. I really enjoyed how you presented it. Hey, a little rain probably helps you appreciate it a little more. God Bless you

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you for your kind words.I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Earl, this is a great poem and so lively. I'm with you all the way. Well, almost. I've always been a warm weather person, but rain is needed so I don't say no when that arrives. But snow? No, thank you, that is not my thing. I liked your fun poem a lot and good luck. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you very much Ulla, I don't mind warm rain either. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Earl I have no idea why I wasn't notified of this post. As a fan, I am supposed to get those notifications? LOL

I like the happiness of this poetry, my friend.

"f you don't want me unhappy
Bring the sun back
And make it snappy
The sun will make me happy Jack"

Bless you and your family. Bob

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thanks Bob, maybe because it was a blind contest entry. Thanks for reading and reviewing my work.
reply by Mastery on 13-Dec-2018
    Oh, that's right. Sorry. :) Bob
Comment from JennaG
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This was such a fun piece! I love what you chose as your topic for what makes you happy! I feel the same way! Sunshine really does make all the difference! Great work! :)

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from rjuselius
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haha. lol. this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear earl! You make it simple yet the message is not always so. an interesting take on the writing prompt, I wish you well!
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from lyenochka
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Well, then you'd like a lot of the southern states including as far south as Hawaii. We always have clouds and rains so you probably want to stay way from the Northwest. Wish you lots of reasons to be happy!

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    I was stationed in Hawaii for four years, I missed springtime.Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from jmshumate
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From Michigan here, and I'm almost there. My wife had to take a short trip to Florida to visit a friend and to get a little warm sunny weather which makes both body and soul feel better. I think it won't be long before I end up walking away from these cold Michigan winters,Lord willing! Thank you for sharing this

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.