What's Wrong With This World
Liars And Cheats and Ki;;ers9 total reviews
Comment from judester
Bravo on your first place finish. I believe the whole system of benefits needs to be overhauled and tightened up for sure. I am sending best wishes and prayers to you and your husband. Your friend in prose, Judy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
Bravo on your first place finish. I believe the whole system of benefits needs to be overhauled and tightened up for sure. I am sending best wishes and prayers to you and your husband. Your friend in prose, Judy
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Comment from Earl Corp
I now see why you won the contest, congratulations on a nice win. I agree with all the points you made. Did you read about the veteran who got almost $300,000on GoFundMe. Again good job.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
I now see why you won the contest, congratulations on a nice win. I agree with all the points you made. Did you read about the veteran who got almost $300,000on GoFundMe. Again good job.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Did you see on Gofundme me they have fund going to buy ladders for the imagriants to scale the wall yup it's true
Comment from Denise J Tidwell
Everything you say is true I'M in the same boat as you! Only I get 10 in food stamps! This world is crashing down around us and we can't do anything about it. I can't marry the man I love due to the fact that I live in Va in Commonwealth state and all my SSD benefits would < to 0
I take 22 meds a day now 3.35 IF I marry 1 example 30% of 700 dollars
Sad sad world
I'll pray for you. You pray for me! God bless you and your family
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
Everything you say is true I'M in the same boat as you! Only I get 10 in food stamps! This world is crashing down around us and we can't do anything about it. I can't marry the man I love due to the fact that I live in Va in Commonwealth state and all my SSD benefits would < to 0
I take 22 meds a day now 3.35 IF I marry 1 example 30% of 700 dollars
Sad sad world
I'll pray for you. You pray for me! God bless you and your family
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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Happy holidays to you and yours I will say my prayers for you in hopes things will get better and besides who now a days get married? Just be as happy as you can be together.
Comment from LIJ Red
You get in a lot of good points, people are always looking for a free lunch, and every free lunch comes out of someone's pocket. My dad got sick in 1947 and we lost everything but a few rags on out back...and came back by pure, hard, dirty work...excellent speech.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
You get in a lot of good points, people are always looking for a free lunch, and every free lunch comes out of someone's pocket. My dad got sick in 1947 and we lost everything but a few rags on out back...and came back by pure, hard, dirty work...excellent speech.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your kindness and support
Comment from kahpot
What a mind-boggling read, I believe everything you have written, still mind-boggling, as you say there is definitely something wrong with this picture, the world has got a lot of things back the front and this is one of them, a wonderful speech, God bless, well done and best wishes for you and yours****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
What a mind-boggling read, I believe everything you have written, still mind-boggling, as you say there is definitely something wrong with this picture, the world has got a lot of things back the front and this is one of them, a wonderful speech, God bless, well done and best wishes for you and yours****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your kindness and support it means a lot to me!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Go Fund Me is for entrepreneurs. People who are developing a product or service. There are other sources for help for cases like yours. You should check into these. I'm sorry about your husband's condition.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
Go Fund Me is for entrepreneurs. People who are developing a product or service. There are other sources for help for cases like yours. You should check into these. I'm sorry about your husband's condition.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
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I am just a small frog in a gigantic puddle
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello. I appreciate your honesty and vivid approach in creating this entry for the ... Speech contest. Your descriptions of flaws and abuse are spot on and need to be addressed.
all the best,
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
Hello. I appreciate your honesty and vivid approach in creating this entry for the ... Speech contest. Your descriptions of flaws and abuse are spot on and need to be addressed.
all the best,
Comment Written 09-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
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Comment from Janilou
This reads like non-fiction rather than the fiction it is listed as. If it is non-fiction, it would be better to list it that way.
I am not sure if you are looking for editing suggestions but there are a few things I noticed.
My Husband is dying and I asked for help did they care hell no!
Would read better written like this:
My husband is dying and I asked for help. Did they care? Hell no!
Then months down the line, yeah, they forgot about you and then (They) come to you asking for a helping hand. They wonder why you turned them away.
Then months down the line, yeah, they forgot about you and then they come to you asking for a helping hand. They wonder why you turned them away.
I know this is a rant, but for the purpose of the contest, it might be better to focus on one topic - that of the friends and neighbors helping each other out in times of need. I only say that because you diverge onto the topic of killings etc toward the end.
If this is indeed non-fiction, then I am sorry to hear of your struggles. I understand how it feels to be cash poor, even if you have equity.
I have thought a few times about starting a Go-Fund Me, but it never felt right for my circumstances.
I have donated to Go-Fund Me on various occasions.
I have found in life that there is much truth to the old adage of giving until it hurts. The more I have given, even when I truly didn't think I could afford it, the more I have received in return. NOT saying this is what you should do, but it has worked for me.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
This reads like non-fiction rather than the fiction it is listed as. If it is non-fiction, it would be better to list it that way.
I am not sure if you are looking for editing suggestions but there are a few things I noticed.
My Husband is dying and I asked for help did they care hell no!
Would read better written like this:
My husband is dying and I asked for help. Did they care? Hell no!
Then months down the line, yeah, they forgot about you and then (They) come to you asking for a helping hand. They wonder why you turned them away.
Then months down the line, yeah, they forgot about you and then they come to you asking for a helping hand. They wonder why you turned them away.
I know this is a rant, but for the purpose of the contest, it might be better to focus on one topic - that of the friends and neighbors helping each other out in times of need. I only say that because you diverge onto the topic of killings etc toward the end.
If this is indeed non-fiction, then I am sorry to hear of your struggles. I understand how it feels to be cash poor, even if you have equity.
I have thought a few times about starting a Go-Fund Me, but it never felt right for my circumstances.
I have donated to Go-Fund Me on various occasions.
I have found in life that there is much truth to the old adage of giving until it hurts. The more I have given, even when I truly didn't think I could afford it, the more I have received in return. NOT saying this is what you should do, but it has worked for me.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 09-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
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I gave till it hurt and then some so you evidently don't me
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I gave till it hurts and then some. The reality is -the truth no one gives a damn how I feel! I live each day for my husband making our final days together count for something.He may live six months or he might live longer I will be here for him by his side fighting for his life we have been married 53 years! Being poor is nothing new.We been poor all our life!nothing surprises me any more it just hurts like hell is all. So don't tell me how I should feel! I have nothing left to give!I am done trying to please people!
Comment from meeshu
you have raised some very important and valid questions, here Author. there are no easy answers, but I do know that if your looking for fairness, you've come to the wrong planet. have faith, 'seek and ye shall find'. believe that..
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
you have raised some very important and valid questions, here Author. there are no easy answers, but I do know that if your looking for fairness, you've come to the wrong planet. have faith, 'seek and ye shall find'. believe that..
Comment Written 09-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
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thank you for your kindness and support