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Comment from Carmen Ducharme
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I love your poem its so to the point and its words speak volumes using only limited words .Well done .I love to write especially when im sad the words just start flowing .

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    thank you carmen :-)
Comment from Phoenix Rising
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So true.
It's been a few years since I have been away from this site,
Happy to be back. And nice to see that you are still posting.
As always my pleasure to read and review your posts.

Phoenix Rising

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
    welcome back pr! :-)
reply by Phoenix Rising on 16-Dec-2019
    Thank you shelley.
    Hard to believe it has been over 7 years since I have been away from this site. I have a lot to write about, and I am curious to see how many members that I know are still here. Hope this Holiday Season is bring you happiness and joy.

    Frank (aka: Red Heart, and Phoenix Rising).
    :-)
Comment from Connie Frazier
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Sage advice that we can all use. I like that you fit it into a poem. You convey a complete and compelling idea, even though two of the three lines are just the word, "write". Pretty darn cool.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    thank you connie :)
Comment from IronPoet
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I like this poem. I like that you bolded and exclaimed the word write at the end. As writers, it is hard to maintain the will to continue to write. This can occur for various reasons; however it must be done in order to become better.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    so true. thank you iron :)
Comment from Janet Foor
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Excellent advice in this 1-9-1 poem. It is quite a challenge to write an 11 syllable poem that makes and sense but this one surely does.

well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    thank you jm :)
Comment from Carolyn Reaves
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This is a great 1-9-1 poem with a great meaning. When we write, we do more than push the pencil- we encourage. I appreciate the writing and look forward to reading mroe of your work.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    thank you carolyn :-)
reply by Carolyn Reaves on 10-Dec-2018
    You are quite welcome.
reply by Carolyn Reaves on 10-Dec-2018
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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Those truly are words to write by. I have been MIA for a few months. I'm just now getting a little inspiration back. Thanks for sharing this inspirational poem. Well done Shelley!

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    thank you jeffrey :-)
Comment from Galactia
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Hi

I like this very short 1-9-1 poem . This is looks like the extension of the 1-6-1 poen.

Write
Even When you do not feel like it

Write.


Great job
Regards
Ia

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    thank you la :-)
Comment from Mark D. R.
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So true of my own efforts at writing my Haiku verse. Too be honest, I think I am most inspirational when I wake up in the morning - paper and pencil then can capture my ideas.

So your last line, "write!" applies to many of us. Thanks for that encouragement.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    thank you mark :-)

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Absoulutely, my friend. That is the truth. A terrific entry for the 1-9-1 contest. Simple and to the point. Good luck & Happy holidays.
-Kerry

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
    thank you kerry :-)
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 09-Dec-2018
    Very welcome.