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Forbidden Kiss

We could not help ourselves

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Comment from WryWriter
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Maybe we should call it the forbidden fifty contest. I'd wait for the word "yes" or this poor sap boss may be getting an employee grievance filed against him. LOL! Great little tale in these fifty words. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
    Today yes, thirty years ago no. Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from rspoet
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And the next days she filed a harassment suit. lol
Ah, the good old days when people could meet and date
without any worries. Your fifty words are well written.
Good luck in the contest
RS


 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Yes, my thought exactly. Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a sensual write and filled with anticipation until the kiss clinched the meet! I enjoyed the journey and I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Thanks much, Dolly, for your read and your comments.