Comment from royowen

Excellent

There are some beautiful colours in the flowery painting that really embellishes both the poetic offering and painting Pam, we'll done my friend, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018

Thank you Roy for your lovely review

reply by royowen on 06-Dec-2018

Welcome

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Nicely constructed Tanka with a good pivot line between the interconnected thoughts. These would make splendid hats for the Sydney Mardi Gras! It looks as though they are somewhat inflamed. What one might consider a sore point!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018

Inflamed right where it is most tender, Tony. Lol. Thank you for a wonderful review

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Phallic shapes?, I would never have thought of that. I love the colors in your painting. The pinks and greens blend so well together. Nice one. Take care. Jen. X

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 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018

Thank you Jen for your wonderful review

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I am not sure about " not leaving much to the imagination", mine goes automatically back to my romantic days of chasing the Girls, I mean that in a very nice way, but yes I see the implications here, very well done****kahpot

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 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018

Thank you kahpot for an excellent review. You girl chaser, you? What teenage boy doesn?t?