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Tanka(majestic)

A Tanka poem

22 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
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Beautiful painting, Pam! I like how you show the soaring glide that make the bird so very majestic! I also like your story about the eagle stealing the fox's dinner. Oh dear! We have plenty of eagles up our way so rabbits and small pets need to be wary.

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 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
    Thank you Helen for your wonderful review
Comment from pome lover
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

that's very good! You nailed the majestic and also the hidden savagery.
When I first moved to Crested Butte, CO in 1986 there were two bald eagles that sat in a tree by the road that went to town, and when we left in 2005, I believe there were six pairs. They were magnificent to watch in flight. I love this poem.
Excellent choice of words
pome lover

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
    Wow. Thank you so much for the extra star and truly lovely review. I am very glad that their population has stabilized