Upon First Breath, Promise Fulfilled
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Comment from visionary1234
Definitely a 'creative approach' to a far too familiar FS prompt! I love your take on this! Inhale/exhale - air, yes, but so very much more. New life giving love and purpose to an older, perhaps tired one. What a beautiful use of incredibly few syllables!!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Definitely a 'creative approach' to a far too familiar FS prompt! I love your take on this! Inhale/exhale - air, yes, but so very much more. New life giving love and purpose to an older, perhaps tired one. What a beautiful use of incredibly few syllables!!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thank you Visionary! I find these very challenging but all True poetry is I guess. You have to dig deep. I Barely made the deadline. This took me 17 hours. So thank you for appreciating it!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, this is a beautiful contest entry you've penned, my friend. When a child comes in the world their first breath of life does fill us with life and fulfillment. It's a magical moment that changes us forever. Best of luck in the contest! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Hello there, this is a beautiful contest entry you've penned, my friend. When a child comes in the world their first breath of life does fill us with life and fulfillment. It's a magical moment that changes us forever. Best of luck in the contest! ~Kerry
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanks so very much!!
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It was my pleasure:))
Comment from Raul1
I love babies and children. They are so innocent and have innocence in them. This poem is beautifully written. Well written. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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I love babies and children. They are so innocent and have innocence in them. This poem is beautifully written. Well written. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from kahpot
Yes, a beautiful short work with an excellent photo to compliment, breathing the air for the first time must be the most treasured of our experiences, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Yes, a beautiful short work with an excellent photo to compliment, breathing the air for the first time must be the most treasured of our experiences, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thank you!
