Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written free verse poem. There are many things we can look at in different ways and often we came to the same conclusion every times. We are playing with words in a creative way.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018

Thanks for the excellent review and your interesting perspective on this poem. It was fun to write; mostly a musical exercise really. I really like to experiment with new forms of making music with language. estory

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks when transformation becomes need of the hour, music in language makes use of environment to the tune of glorious achievement; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018

Thank you so much for the five star review and your interesting comments supporting this experimental piece of poetry. I am glad you enjoyed it and found it so thought provoking. estory

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

As I was reading through your verse, I was struck by the similarity... yet differences.. in your words. The only thing missing is a cadence. I read it aloud and could not find one... do not know why. Different.

Melissa

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018

Thanks so much for the five star review and your interesting perspective of this poem. In this kind of poetry, I am really trying to create music out of language in a new way, using repeating patterns of phrases and changing declentions of words rather than meter and rhyme scheme. I like to try new and different things sometimes estory