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Master of All I Purvey

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Whatever happens, even in natural calamity, disaster, he knows how to do his job, he is master of all he purvey, for he is confident of doing it capably; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    Thank you, Dr. Alcreator. :))
Comment from phill doran
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hello to you
Excellent writing. A wonderfully sinister narrative - the 'fedora' is a very light and deft touch as is the cobblestone street.
The vocabulary brings a medieval feel to it, which echoes in the narrator's underlying sentiments. Master of the elements.
Engaging and different - perhaps these are related.
Yes, this works for me. Good luck in your contest and I wish you well with your writing.
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    Thanks a million, Phil.

    I swear I always think NO ONE is going to get what I'm going for. But you make my day! mike
reply by phill doran on 05-Dec-2018
    Ah Mike!
    it may be 'survey' though, rather than 'purvey' - a small point
    cheers
    phill