The Poem That Defies Naming
There, at rainbow's end...31 total reviews
Comment from aryr
Good luck Yvette in the contest. This was incredibly well done. You addressed all the figures of one's imagination and brought it to life in its own special way. I liked how you used the different colors for each figure. Very much enjoyed, very well done, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Good luck Yvette in the contest. This was incredibly well done. You addressed all the figures of one's imagination and brought it to life in its own special way. I liked how you used the different colors for each figure. Very much enjoyed, very well done, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Wow -- you just made my day with that review, aryr - thank you so much for taking the time to write it! :) ;) It was a fun rainbow to imagine myself riding as I penned it! :) ;) LOL!! Take care and take time to ride a few beautiful rainbows of your own this week! :) ;) Yvette ;)
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You are most welcome Yvette, rainbows are great.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This well-written, highly imaginative piece, I feel, has several
"levels": It is a bit whimsical and hyperbolic (meant FAVORABLY)
while conveying the theme that we are limited in our powers.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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This well-written, highly imaginative piece, I feel, has several
"levels": It is a bit whimsical and hyperbolic (meant FAVORABLY)
while conveying the theme that we are limited in our powers.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your insightful comments, Janice - I do hope that you come back and find those levels sometime! :) ;) It was a fun rainbow to imagine myself riding as I penned it! :) ;) LOL!! Take care and take time to ride a few beautiful rainbows of your own this week! :) ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from BeasPeas
What a super poem. You've gone the extra mile with this nicely composed creative piece, including the image and presentation. I especially like your ending lines. Yes, we can write about all the things our imagination (muse) holds. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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What a super poem. You've gone the extra mile with this nicely composed creative piece, including the image and presentation. I especially like your ending lines. Yes, we can write about all the things our imagination (muse) holds. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Marilyn - I am glad that you enjoyed it! :) ;) It was a fun rainbow to imagine myself riding as I penned it! :) ;) LOL!! Take care and take time to ride a few beautiful rainbows of your own this week! :) ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from kidz
Great rhymes. I love the rhyming. You have done it well. Only...I wonder why you use mythical creatures to convey the meaning (dragon, leprechaun). Good luck with your writings
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Great rhymes. I love the rhyming. You have done it well. Only...I wonder why you use mythical creatures to convey the meaning (dragon, leprechaun). Good luck with your writings
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Why not? :) ;) It is a write about 'over the rainbow' and the imagination.....? :) ;) Thanx for stopping in for the read and review -- have a fantastical week of your own with as many dragons, leprechauns, or other mythical creatures your imagination can dream up! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Unique in its creativity, insightfulness, fantasy visions, ... and imagination. The words take the reader to unseen worlds... Beautiful rhyme and rhythm, this poem may mesmerize, even give "wings" to a child or the child in us. The colours and art work are spectacular.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Unique in its creativity, insightfulness, fantasy visions, ... and imagination. The words take the reader to unseen worlds... Beautiful rhyme and rhythm, this poem may mesmerize, even give "wings" to a child or the child in us. The colours and art work are spectacular.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Hopefully to the child in all of us, Donka - I am glad that you enjoyed it! :) ;) It was a fun rainbow to imagine myself riding as I penned it! :) ;) LOL! Take care and take time to ride a few beautiful rainbows of your own this week! :) ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from lyenochka
What a cool presentation, Yvette! I like your rainbow verses and your colorful imagination which draws the reader to think of so many possibilities. Best to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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What a cool presentation, Yvette! I like your rainbow verses and your colorful imagination which draws the reader to think of so many possibilities. Best to you in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Helen - I am really glad that you enjoyed it! :) ;) It was a fun rainbow to imagine myself riding as I penned it! :) ;) LOL! Take care and take time to ride a few beautiful rainbows of your own this week! :) ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from royowen
I love this poem Yvette, it poses questions without answers, and being a person who enjoys pondering the "whys" "wherefores" "whosywhats" I particularly like, it's clever, it's thought provoking, and it's very cleverly rhymed and created. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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I love this poem Yvette, it poses questions without answers, and being a person who enjoys pondering the "whys" "wherefores" "whosywhats" I particularly like, it's clever, it's thought provoking, and it's very cleverly rhymed and created. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Roy - I am glad that you enjoyed it! :) ;) It was a fun rainbow to imagine myself riding as I penned it! :) ;) LOL! Take care and take time to ride a few beautiful rainbows of your own this week! :) ;) Yvette ;)
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Well done Yvette,
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the things that you can't do, it is not always possible to do what we like to do, and there are some things we prefer not to try and do because we might be seen as rude.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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A very well-written poem about the things that you can't do, it is not always possible to do what we like to do, and there are some things we prefer not to try and do because we might be seen as rude.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thank you so very much for your review, Sandra -- so very much appreciated! ;) ;) Have a wonderful week! :) ;)
Comment from Mastery
I like this one, Yvette. I even like the coloring which is usually a turn off for me when people try to fancy up their work in some artful way.
Good poetry stands on its own, doesn't it?
This stanza is my fave:
I can't explain deepest fears
when a smile appears
with or without tears..."
Bless you, big talent showing here.... :) Bob:
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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I like this one, Yvette. I even like the coloring which is usually a turn off for me when people try to fancy up their work in some artful way.
Good poetry stands on its own, doesn't it?
This stanza is my fave:
I can't explain deepest fears
when a smile appears
with or without tears..."
Bless you, big talent showing here.... :) Bob:
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review, Bob -- I guess I just enjoyed enhancing the 'over the rainbow fantasy' feel I was going for...hope it wasn't too distracting. ;) ;) Thanx and have a wonderful week! :) ;)
Comment from Debbie Pope
You are letting you love of fantasy shine through in this one. It's one of your most creative pieces. You use colors of the rainbow and spacing to create a rainbow. I hope that everyone notices that special touch. I'd do something with the word rainbow in the description to call attention to your polish and finesse. That rainbow's got to be worth bonus points if they only notice.
Your rhymes are exceptional. lt's hard to do three in a row for that many stanzas without it sounding forced. Yours flows naturally from mermaid to leprechaun to fairies . . .
This piece shows so much work and skill. Good luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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You are letting you love of fantasy shine through in this one. It's one of your most creative pieces. You use colors of the rainbow and spacing to create a rainbow. I hope that everyone notices that special touch. I'd do something with the word rainbow in the description to call attention to your polish and finesse. That rainbow's got to be worth bonus points if they only notice.
Your rhymes are exceptional. lt's hard to do three in a row for that many stanzas without it sounding forced. Yours flows naturally from mermaid to leprechaun to fairies . . .
This piece shows so much work and skill. Good luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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You noticed!! ;) Okay...check out the new tag line....
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I like it. Surely they will be looking for a rainbow now.
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Thank you so much for always being there and willing to help, MQ!! Have a wonderful evening! ;)
