A Christmas poem
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Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
Hi cleo85
Hope the fact this poem made me smile cheers you up. Very beautifully and craftily done. Feel better soon comrade and may 2020 bring you hope and joy! Thinking of you, R
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Hi cleo85
Hope the fact this poem made me smile cheers you up. Very beautifully and craftily done. Feel better soon comrade and may 2020 bring you hope and joy! Thinking of you, R
Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
Comment from RShipp
Wow... What an accomplishment to pull off... an acrostic ON BOTH ENDS.
I don't think I have ever read (or seen) one before.
You admirably succeeded at your task.
Enjoyed!!
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Wow... What an accomplishment to pull off... an acrostic ON BOTH ENDS.
I don't think I have ever read (or seen) one before.
You admirably succeeded at your task.
Enjoyed!!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Wow! This brilliantly creative work. This must have taken quite a bit of time to prepare such a flawless poem. Sorry to know you are feeling a bit sad, and will send a prayer on your behalf in hopes your spirit will be lifted. I know, though, how it can affect the desire to write :( xoxo
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Wow! This brilliantly creative work. This must have taken quite a bit of time to prepare such a flawless poem. Sorry to know you are feeling a bit sad, and will send a prayer on your behalf in hopes your spirit will be lifted. I know, though, how it can affect the desire to write :( xoxo
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
Comment from LaRosa
I have never seen a double ended acrostic. It's fascinating. I kept wondering as I read, how much work you went thru to make it all 'end' correctly. I can picture Santa's careful thought process and I really enjoyed it.
I wish you a better, more peaceful, and uplifting year ahead, especially for next Christmas. They can be beautiful and joyful and yet hard to be a part of sometimes. it's a nice idea to repost a moment of happiness for you. God Bless you richly in the coming days!
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I have never seen a double ended acrostic. It's fascinating. I kept wondering as I read, how much work you went thru to make it all 'end' correctly. I can picture Santa's careful thought process and I really enjoyed it.
I wish you a better, more peaceful, and uplifting year ahead, especially for next Christmas. They can be beautiful and joyful and yet hard to be a part of sometimes. it's a nice idea to repost a moment of happiness for you. God Bless you richly in the coming days!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
Comment from Bichon
I really love the whole theme you have in your poem and it really was a joyous read. I'm sorry to hear about your sadness, and I hope you'll feel better soon. Have a great new year friend.
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I really love the whole theme you have in your poem and it really was a joyous read. I'm sorry to hear about your sadness, and I hope you'll feel better soon. Have a great new year friend.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
Comment from Susan Larson
I'm sorry to hear that you are going through a sad time, but I'm glad you were able to repost what I consider quite a masterpiece of acrostic writing. Hope the new year brings you happiness.
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I'm sorry to hear that you are going through a sad time, but I'm glad you were able to repost what I consider quite a masterpiece of acrostic writing. Hope the new year brings you happiness.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a nicely written and colorful holiday greeting and a cleverly constructed Acrostic.
Well done and thank you for sharing this piece of art with us.
Sharon
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This is a nicely written and colorful holiday greeting and a cleverly constructed Acrostic.
Well done and thank you for sharing this piece of art with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
Comment from Sallyo
A double acrostic indeed. It's a difficult form. I think I tried one once... I'm sorry you're going through a sad time, and I wish you more happiness in 2020.
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A double acrostic indeed. It's a difficult form. I think I tried one once... I'm sorry you're going through a sad time, and I wish you more happiness in 2020.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a plaintive Christmas poem, stunning in its reflection, form and image - artful in its rendering and Christmas fare and flair. I offer my support in this time of trial for you, but I feel substantiated when I say "this will pass," as all things do in time, sometimes quickly, sometimes not so quickly. Regardless, circumstances are subject to change, and yours will change as well - a bright New Year beckons. Merry Christmas and the Happiest of New Years is my wish for you...
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In my opinion, a plaintive Christmas poem, stunning in its reflection, form and image - artful in its rendering and Christmas fare and flair. I offer my support in this time of trial for you, but I feel substantiated when I say "this will pass," as all things do in time, sometimes quickly, sometimes not so quickly. Regardless, circumstances are subject to change, and yours will change as well - a bright New Year beckons. Merry Christmas and the Happiest of New Years is my wish for you...
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Kahpot. This is a wonderful acrostic. I am impressed that you were able to get your message across and you actually formed a double acrostic in doing it. That requires talent and patience.
I read your notes and I want to wish you the best and hope that you are feeling much better very soon
In the meantime, you did a great job on this poem and I wish you a Merry Christmas.
Robert
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Hello Kahpot. This is a wonderful acrostic. I am impressed that you were able to get your message across and you actually formed a double acrostic in doing it. That requires talent and patience.
I read your notes and I want to wish you the best and hope that you are feeling much better very soon
In the meantime, you did a great job on this poem and I wish you a Merry Christmas.
Robert
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
