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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Once Upon Cary Grant"A collection of award winning poems
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Comment from c_lucas
Maybe when it comes our time, there will be a sign on Hell below the locked gates. "Closed for Repairs. Installing air conditioning." This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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Maybe when it comes our time, there will be a sign on Hell below the locked gates. "Closed for Repairs. Installing air conditioning." This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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That would be cool. Thank you for reading and reviewing my work.
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You're welcome.
Comment from kiwijenny
Well when you put it that way it makes you realize that Cary Grant was quite a dude. Handsome debonair and risky ..or riskA ....(so I don't get all those fanstory critters )
This was a fun read for a fun write
Well penned
God bless
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Well when you put it that way it makes you realize that Cary Grant was quite a dude. Handsome debonair and risky ..or riskA ....(so I don't get all those fanstory critters )
This was a fun read for a fun write
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from MissMerri
Well, mystery poet, I had fun reading this as well. I think you did an amazing job of incorporating so many titles into a sensible poem. That couldn't have been an easy task. So, you had fun writing... we had fun reading. A great bargain. MM
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Well, mystery poet, I had fun reading this as well. I think you did an amazing job of incorporating so many titles into a sensible poem. That couldn't have been an easy task. So, you had fun writing... we had fun reading. A great bargain. MM
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Thank you MM, i appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from susand3022
Hi! This IS a fun entry, but you were right in your own assessment so I'm not going to repeat it. You wrote a story that was easy to follow, was cute and fun, you had a good time with it and that is what counts. Writing through movie titles couldn't have been easy! Good luck with the contest!
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Hi! This IS a fun entry, but you were right in your own assessment so I'm not going to repeat it. You wrote a story that was easy to follow, was cute and fun, you had a good time with it and that is what counts. Writing through movie titles couldn't have been easy! Good luck with the contest!
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from victor 66
I think your entry is pretty funny and you seem to have all of Cary Grant's (AKA, Archibald Leach) movies in a humous contest. I think that there has never been a movie star with as much class as he. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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I think your entry is pretty funny and you seem to have all of Cary Grant's (AKA, Archibald Leach) movies in a humous contest. I think that there has never been a movie star with as much class as he. Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Thank you Victor. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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It was my pleasure. I have many good memories from those old movies with Cary Grant.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a very good use of these title. It describes an affair and its violent aftermath well. I like how they will meet in Hell at the end.
Good luck and keep writing
Happy Holidays.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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This is a very good use of these title. It describes an affair and its violent aftermath well. I like how they will meet in Hell at the end.
Good luck and keep writing
Happy Holidays.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Thank you it was fun to write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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You're welcome. The fun you had makes me want to try it.
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Comment from BlueTiger
I think you did a great job with this poem. The rhymes didn't feel terribly forced to me, and it was fun to read. Definitely a challenge to put all of these titles together, but you got a cohesive story working here. Best of luck on the challenge!
-BT
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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I think you did a great job with this poem. The rhymes didn't feel terribly forced to me, and it was fun to read. Definitely a challenge to put all of these titles together, but you got a cohesive story working here. Best of luck on the challenge!
-BT
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Thank you it was fun to write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from jmdg1954
Well, I'm glad you had fun writing this for us and yourselves.
I thought you did well with integrating movie titles into your lines. Nothing seemed forced and it made sense.
Good luck in the contest. John
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Well, I'm glad you had fun writing this for us and yourselves.
I thought you did well with integrating movie titles into your lines. Nothing seemed forced and it made sense.
Good luck in the contest. John
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from RGstar
" My life became a country song"
The above sums it up well. An aura of the times...almost a song-like-movie quality to this one...as if watching part of a movie.
Well done.
Good luck with it.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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" My life became a country song"
The above sums it up well. An aura of the times...almost a song-like-movie quality to this one...as if watching part of a movie.
Well done.
Good luck with it.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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A Cary Grant movie? Thank you for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I thought your entry read rather smoothly myself, all things considered.
I was sorry to read that the jilted lover wound up being hanged.
I always like to root for the underdog for personal reasons.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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I thought your entry read rather smoothly myself, all things considered.
I was sorry to read that the jilted lover wound up being hanged.
I always like to root for the underdog for personal reasons.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my work.
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You are welcome. :}
