acres of compassion
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Comment from zanya
Yes a most effective use of the restricted format of the rhyming 1-6- 1 here achieved and even a simile included and some words of wisdom to booth- lovely pic
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Yes a most effective use of the restricted format of the rhyming 1-6- 1 here achieved and even a simile included and some words of wisdom to booth- lovely pic
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thanks for your encouraging review and sparkly stars. Imagine if we were all just a bit more mindful of our thoughts and deeds. We cannot change the world, but we can keep our little sphere peaceful and loving. Cheers. j
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Very good 1-6-1! You were awesome competition. I was entered into this contest and I believe you will win. I just wanted to review and give you proper concession so that when you are able to reply I can at least read more of your poetry. It was a beautiful message. My was just silly. Cheers Fonda
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Very good 1-6-1! You were awesome competition. I was entered into this contest and I believe you will win. I just wanted to review and give you proper concession so that when you are able to reply I can at least read more of your poetry. It was a beautiful message. My was just silly. Cheers Fonda
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Thanks for the encouraging review. I would love to share our stories. Cheers, j
Comment from Marc Grimaldi
The Bible says that whatever a person sows, he will reap. This is done so well, especially for a 1-6-1. Sadly, we are often so short sighted and don't consider the big picture. This is a reminder to think of the long-term investment that is involved in doing good, and not the immediate results. Great job! 6 stars and my vote.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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The Bible says that whatever a person sows, he will reap. This is done so well, especially for a 1-6-1. Sadly, we are often so short sighted and don't consider the big picture. This is a reminder to think of the long-term investment that is involved in doing good, and not the immediate results. Great job! 6 stars and my vote.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Thanks for the insightful review and sparkly stars Marc. I am afraid that the internet has made it so easy to cast scorn and criticize others in quick, stabbing bytes. We cannot change the world, but we can have a positive impact on others with kind words, compassion and love in our own little spheres. Have a wonderful Sunday, cheers, judester
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This was so appealing to the eye.
A perfect 1-6-1 with rhyme.
I really love the message!
I absolutely love the title; it fits your poem well.
Best of luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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This was so appealing to the eye.
A perfect 1-6-1 with rhyme.
I really love the message!
I absolutely love the title; it fits your poem well.
Best of luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Thanks for your encouraging review. Imagine acres of flowers seeded by each act of compassion. sigh
Comment from Jean Hornby
I like this because your so few words say so much. What you have said here is so very true. It reminds me of what you sow you reap. We do indeed plant out own seeds it is a pity that more perplexing don't realise this , but your poem states a very good message to those that don't
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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I like this because your so few words say so much. What you have said here is so very true. It reminds me of what you sow you reap. We do indeed plant out own seeds it is a pity that more perplexing don't realise this , but your poem states a very good message to those that don't
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Thanks for your insightful review. We cannot change the world, but we can change our lives by day to day random acts of kindness and compassion. Cheers, have a wonderful Sunday, j
Comment from Sally Law
Beautiful 1-6-1 poetry and what a lovely choice for your artwork framing your piece so perfectly. I like to think my writings are good seeds sown to bless, encourage and evoke change for the good.
All my best,
Sally
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Beautiful 1-6-1 poetry and what a lovely choice for your artwork framing your piece so perfectly. I like to think my writings are good seeds sown to bless, encourage and evoke change for the good.
All my best,
Sally
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thanks for the review. As I get better with writing, I realize the power of finding the perfect image 'et le mot just' to get my point and emotion understood and felt. I try every poem and prompt at least once. Cheers, j
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written rhyming 1-6-1 poem you ht ave penned for the contest. You used great descriptive rhyming words and very lovely art work to go with your words. Best wishes if this is in a contest! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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This is a very well written rhyming 1-6-1 poem you ht ave penned for the contest. You used great descriptive rhyming words and very lovely art work to go with your words. Best wishes if this is in a contest! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thanks for the encouraging review. Yes imagine if our good deeds turned to acres of colorful flowers. Have a great week end, cheers, j
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
An eternal true message is expressed, truly, good deeds grow, as good seeds on land grows naturally; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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An eternal true message is expressed, truly, good deeds grow, as good seeds on land grows naturally; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thanks for the insightful review. Imagine if every good deed turned into flowers, Have a great week end, cheers, j
