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Australia on Fire

Never been this bad before

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Comment from Dean Kuch
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This sounds horrible, Kay!
Much like what those in parts of the great state of California are experiencing here in the US with all the wildfires and loss of property, and, more importantly, their lives.
I hope things get better for all involved.
They're in my prayers...
~Dean

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    G'day Dean, Yes, catastrophic conditions with 100 fires not contained, 800 homes destroyed and it's not over yet, by a long-shot. Thank you for your prayers. Love, Kay.
reply by Dean Kuch on 30-Nov-2018
    You're very welcome, Kay.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Whoa, that's some picture and what a horrid fire. Honestly this climate change is really doing a number around the world.

That said, this is a finely written poem and you've brought fiery imagery to your readers.

Thank you for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    G'day Gloria, Yes, catastrophic conditions that I have never seen in my lifetime. We have 100 fires burning out of control and already 800 home destroyed. Sorry, can't be a happy girl today. Love, Kay.
Comment from beizanten
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A great and pretty powerful beginning that entices the reader to read more. A great description of situation in paragraph two. Pretty good third paragraph and a great fourth paragraph

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thanks for reading about our catastrophic conditions with 100 fires burning out of control and 800 homes lost so far. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from susand3022
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Wow Aussie, I had no idea that was happening there! We are so used to our west coast fires here, and this year is worse than any other. The president of course is being ass about it. Apparently they have nothing at all to do with having no rain and heavy winds. There are over 100 fires there right now? That's awful! I do hope you are safely out of range, as I am on the opposite coast. If you aren't then get there! Susan

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Hi Susan, I am in Australia not America. Yes, 100 fires out of control, 800 homes lost and it's not over yet. Thanks for reading. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from meeshu
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while reading this work I was thinking, you too? you have created some images we have seen here in California. good write, Kace......................meeshu

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Hi Meeshu, No, I live in a city not the bush. We have 100 fires out of control and 800 homes lost, it's not over yet. Love, Kace.