Dial H for Hitman
Arranging a murder can be difficult.3 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I really enjoyed this one! I liked the bantering back and forth, and the assassin always being one up on the caller.
The very beginning got my attention. That was an awesome start.
The ending made me smile (hope that doesn't make me evil).
A really good read!
The very best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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I really enjoyed this one! I liked the bantering back and forth, and the assassin always being one up on the caller.
The very beginning got my attention. That was an awesome start.
The ending made me smile (hope that doesn't make me evil).
A really good read!
The very best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Earl Corp
A picky hitman with a conscience, reminds me of John Cusack in Grosse Pointe Blank. Very well written with a nice twist at the end. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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A picky hitman with a conscience, reminds me of John Cusack in Grosse Pointe Blank. Very well written with a nice twist at the end. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from RodG
I love the tongue-in-cheek tone you use here, especially in characterizing your hitman who could be Peter Falk's bumbling brother. And a very clever all-dialog format. This one has WINNER stamped all over it. Rod
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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I love the tongue-in-cheek tone you use here, especially in characterizing your hitman who could be Peter Falk's bumbling brother. And a very clever all-dialog format. This one has WINNER stamped all over it. Rod
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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Thank you for the review. I appreciate your comments.
