Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a soothing and warm write despite the snowy scene, I wish you luck with he contest, I enjoyed your words here Trisha, lets hope our journey is not ending anytime soon! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018

I agree! I also appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Lune poem. We will sooner or later come to the end of this earthly path, and we will find He is waiting to welcome us into His Kingdom on the other side.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018

Thank you very much for your positive review. I?m glad you enjoyed my poem.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from RodG

Excellent

It's snowing here--just like in your graphic--so your message comes through as welcome news. A very comforting presentation in lune format.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018

Where are you Rod? Thank you very much for your positive review. I?m glad you enjoyed my poem.
Hugs, Trisha

reply by RodG on 26-Nov-2018

I am in Chicago. Storm Bruce blew through. Very cloudy now but no snow.

Comment from Jaye Bennett

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem. It reads so smoothly, tells of being welcomed into the afterlife. I think it's a "me" problem, but I can't seem to understand the last line. I'll have to mull it over. That doesn't change the beauty or the smoothness. Good job.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018

Thank you very much for your positive review. I?m glad you enjoyed my poem.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A beautiful Lune offering, ma'am -- so deep and meaningful in only those few words! :) :) what a wonderful reminder to all the believers...especially as the holidays are moving in! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck!! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018

Thanks for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Excellent presentation in this short 3-5-3 Lune contest entry. I must say that I am having trouble seeing the relevance of the last line to the first two.... they are connected... I am sure it is just me..... All the best,

Melissa

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018

Don?t put yourself down! I mean that a funeral (church) is the place where God takes the soul up to heaven. Does that help? Thanks for your kind review
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from damommy

Excellent

What a nice lune poem, and the presentation is beautiful. Yes, He'll welcome us with open arms on our last stop. Such a comforting thought.

I'd like to live in your picture. 8-)

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018

I?m grateful for your review
Hugs Trisha