This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "The Answer"Third book in the time travel trilogy
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is written wonderfully. I really enjoy this story. I am really worried that Veronica or Mildred somehow messed up history during a time travel. How will they fix it? Can it be fixed?
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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This is written wonderfully. I really enjoy this story. I am really worried that Veronica or Mildred somehow messed up history during a time travel. How will they fix it? Can it be fixed?
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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There is lots to sort out, and hopefully Veronica will learn more to help her understand how it has all gone wrong and if it's possible to put things right. Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, Barbara, and the wonderful review. You are so kind! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very good continuation of this time travel excerpt. The dialogue is good and you keep upping the tension with each paragraph. i am looking forward to the next installment. All the best,
Melissa
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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This is a very good continuation of this time travel excerpt. The dialogue is good and you keep upping the tension with each paragraph. i am looking forward to the next installment. All the best,
Melissa
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Melissa, for this lovely review. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from giraffmang
Now that's what I call a plot development... super stuff. Veronica's confused state comes across very well as does Mildred's reactions.
There you go. Now, let's be getting' that cuppa - drop the 'g' from gettin'.
definitely did have a bang to your head- clip the to.
Reckon I'll never get used to it."- and here as well.
You knows how long. After Mrs Humphries died, it was the only way I could stay here. - need opening speech marks here.
I weren't goin' into one of them - int'?
All the best
G
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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Now that's what I call a plot development... super stuff. Veronica's confused state comes across very well as does Mildred's reactions.
There you go. Now, let's be getting' that cuppa - drop the 'g' from gettin'.
definitely did have a bang to your head- clip the to.
Reckon I'll never get used to it."- and here as well.
You knows how long. After Mrs Humphries died, it was the only way I could stay here. - need opening speech marks here.
I weren't goin' into one of them - int'?
All the best
G
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Gareth! I'm just delighted you enjoyed this part. I've made all the corrections, I'm really pleased you are the first one to review! Thank you, my friend. :)) xxxx
