Poems
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Comment from tfawcus
Crikey! This one must have taken a bit of research. If it hadn't been for your author notes I might have been forgiven for thinking you were writing in a foreign language!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Crikey! This one must have taken a bit of research. If it hadn't been for your author notes I might have been forgiven for thinking you were writing in a foreign language!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Tony, for giving this a look.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello, Bill. What a beautiful photo to enhance your verse. I did have a bit of trouble reading your verse and it making sense.... I did find your notes and went back inserting the definitions, but it created a very choppy read with having to go back and forth so often. Just sayin....
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Hello, Bill. What a beautiful photo to enhance your verse. I did have a bit of trouble reading your verse and it making sense.... I did find your notes and went back inserting the definitions, but it created a very choppy read with having to go back and forth so often. Just sayin....
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Made ya work. Tee hee. Thanks for giving it a look, Melissa
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
What a beautiful Tanka Bill, with a delightful sprinkling of especial colours that make your words that little bit more enjoyable.
So clever and very creative
Mitchell
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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What a beautiful Tanka Bill, with a delightful sprinkling of especial colours that make your words that little bit more enjoyable.
So clever and very creative
Mitchell
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Mitchell
Comment from Anntonette
I did not know these words existed, except xanadu. Very descriptive and color piece. Love the uniqueness! Complexity and simplicity in one :)
Well done!
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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I did not know these words existed, except xanadu. Very descriptive and color piece. Love the uniqueness! Complexity and simplicity in one :)
Well done!
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Anntonette
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Bill A clever Tanka and as expected from you different and inventive. I thought You had invented a new language LOL but loved your glossary which made this a well written Tanka Well done Cheers Christine
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Hi Bill A clever Tanka and as expected from you different and inventive. I thought You had invented a new language LOL but loved your glossary which made this a well written Tanka Well done Cheers Christine
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Christine
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You are welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have some colourful descriptive words here to set the moody scene and an accumulation of shades of golden sun, an unusual and clever write Bill, love Dolly x
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You have some colourful descriptive words here to set the moody scene and an accumulation of shades of golden sun, an unusual and clever write Bill, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Dolly.
