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Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wonderful artwork. Single leaves of positive thoughts can become big piles of leaves. I like the phrase, "twirl down." It gives the image of a spirling movement. Very nice. Excellent 3 line ekphrastic poem. Thanks for sharing.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Wonderful artwork. Single leaves of positive thoughts can become big piles of leaves. I like the phrase, "twirl down." It gives the image of a spirling movement. Very nice. Excellent 3 line ekphrastic poem. Thanks for sharing.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Thank you for reading and your great positive review, hugs Trisha
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You are positively welcome.
Jesse
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Thank you for reading and your great positive review, hugs Trisha
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You're welcome, Trisha
Jesse
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Have a great week!
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You, too!
Comment from Debbie Pope
Oh, I love this Bucketlist. Your last line should win it for you. What a great analogy to develop. You can train your mind to think more positively. And, it starts with one positive thought. Then another comes.
You are such a great example for me to follow with your style and quirkiness, I almost forgot to count your syllables. Line two has 8 though. I like the repetition of "single," so I guess you are stuck with modifying "positive." I don't think that you lose much with "hopeful" or " cheerful."
Good luck in the contest. This is another good entry of yours.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Oh, I love this Bucketlist. Your last line should win it for you. What a great analogy to develop. You can train your mind to think more positively. And, it starts with one positive thought. Then another comes.
You are such a great example for me to follow with your style and quirkiness, I almost forgot to count your syllables. Line two has 8 though. I like the repetition of "single," so I guess you are stuck with modifying "positive." I don't think that you lose much with "hopeful" or " cheerful."
Good luck in the contest. This is another good entry of yours.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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I don?t hold my breath for winning! I?m grateful for your complimentary review
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about how we should concern about single act and give positive interaction and thoughts and for such little act may bring in wider return in exchange; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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This speaks about how we should concern about single act and give positive interaction and thoughts and for such little act may bring in wider return in exchange; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Al
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from tfawcus
Nice use of simile here to make your point. It's surprising how things grow if you just take them one at a time and keep going. This has many applications in life.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Nice use of simile here to make your point. It's surprising how things grow if you just take them one at a time and keep going. This has many applications in life.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Hi, Tony thank you very much for a complimentary review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from dragonpoet
Single leaves are a good metaphor for single deeds of kindness. But the more they pile up the nicer the scene looks.
Happy Thanksgiving, if it applies).
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Single leaves are a good metaphor for single deeds of kindness. But the more they pile up the nicer the scene looks.
Happy Thanksgiving, if it applies).
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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A complimentary review, thank you
Hugs, Trisha
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Don't mention it, Trisha.
Joan
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, I hate to say it since I'll be in the race, but I think I just read the winner - just wonderful, ma'am!! ;) Your combination of the seasonal with the emotional...brilliant! :) ;) Thank you for sharing your awesomeness! ;) LOL! ;) Yvette ;)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Well, I hate to say it since I'll be in the race, but I think I just read the winner - just wonderful, ma'am!! ;) Your combination of the seasonal with the emotional...brilliant! :) ;) Thank you for sharing your awesomeness! ;) LOL! ;) Yvette ;)
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Yvette my ? awesome ? head won?t fit though the doorway soon. Your compliments are great but, I generally get final votes near the bottom!
The six stars Made my day
Hugs, Trisha
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Yvette my ? awesome ? head won?t fit though the doorway soon. Your compliments are great but, I generally get final votes near the bottom!
The six stars Made my day
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
I like your positive thinking. Sometimes, my thoughts seem scarce when I can't think of anything to write. Lovely poem with good presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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I like your positive thinking. Sometimes, my thoughts seem scarce when I can't think of anything to write. Lovely poem with good presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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A complimentary review, thank you
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem. When we show gratitude and thing positive thoughts we will receive positivity in abundance from unexpected sources.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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A very well-written three-line poem. When we show gratitude and thing positive thoughts we will receive positivity in abundance from unexpected sources.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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I appreciate your review. That whole system is called, ?The Law of Attractionl? what you give out positively you get back more.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Seeing the leaves fall and the changes in our scene from summer to autumn often leaves me meloncholy, but not in your poem! No doubt these leaves falling gives your muse a kick! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Seeing the leaves fall and the changes in our scene from summer to autumn often leaves me meloncholy, but not in your poem! No doubt these leaves falling gives your muse a kick! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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I get nostalgic in the autumn. I love the colors, and the nip in the air. Most of all I like the change from summer (here) because it gets too hot for me.
I?m thankful for your connnection and reviews from you.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lovely positive 3 line poem and a great comparison between the single autumn leaf and a single positive thought eventually leading to 'big piles' nicely done.
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Lovely positive 3 line poem and a great comparison between the single autumn leaf and a single positive thought eventually leading to 'big piles' nicely done.
cheers
valda
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Cheers! Happy Thanksgiving, Valda! I?m always grareful for your reviews,
Hugs,Trisha
