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Comment from Anntonette
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I love how you compared the leaves to our thoughts. If we give little thought in a situation, it can turn out as a big success later on. Thanks for pointing that out!
- Anntonette J

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
    You are very welcome! I?m grateful for your kind review..
    Hugs,Trisha
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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I love your idea of 'single positive thoughts ... forms big piles'. You can turn your whole life around, I believe with positive thoughts and thoughts of gratitude. Well illustrated. I really enjoyed this. A perfect 3-liner.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
    A complimentary review, thank you
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mark D. R.
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The leafed image and words are so true. And your verse absolutely reflect the same.

Positive thoughts do lead to forming big piles in one's life.

The yellow and black were good color choices for me.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
    A complimentary review, thank you
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Lady Jane
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Why yes they do, sadly though, leaves can be stuffed in bags for collection while positive thoughts, if not relished, will blow away in the wind, replaced by pesky negative ones. Great 6 line piece, dear. There are so many good ones, I don't dare enter. The image here is impressive. Love your entry and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Janelle

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
    I?m grateful for your kind review
    Hugs, Tisha
Comment from Sugarray77
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I love this. Comparing leaves to thoughts or ideas is a wonderful perspective and one I really Like. A superb entry for the 3 Line contest. Good luck and all the best,

Melissa



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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
    I am grateful for your kind complimentary review, Melissa,
    Hugs, Trisha