Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Can't wait to go back to Caribbean next May. The sunsets are gorgeous! Between the turquoise waters and pink skies- our senses are touched in every way! Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018

Oh, I envy you your trip. It is definitely something to look forward to. Thanks for the review, June.

Always,

Melissa

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

A very enjoyable ABC poem, Melissa. You paint a most delightful image of dawn over the water. Looking at that photo, as I read your words, I can feel the wet sand under my fingers, and hear the gentle roar of the ocean. Lovely stuff. Craig

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018

Thank you. All the best,

Melissa

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for capturing and sharing the "moment of sunrise" in this ABC format. I admired your personification of "dawn" and your use of color plus the striking picture. Cheers and happy Turkey Day- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Thanks so much, Joan.

Melissa

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

That is indeed a glorious sunrise. Your ABC poem is well described. Lots of imagery contained in this piece. "Liquid movement of the changing sky" is so appropriate for the dawn and sunset times of day. Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Thank you, Marilyn. I really appreciate your comments. I am glad you like my liquid sky.... although it really doesn?t belong to me... and then it is not always pink... sometimes different colors... (I hope you like my attempt at humor). All the best,

Melissa

Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

Melissa, you write a motivating poem. Right now it is raining and cold, the beach is close by, but the weather is outside. Your words make me wish for the sunshine to warm my weary bones. Thank you for the memory. :)

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

I hope you get a good day at the beach very soon. Thank you for the great review.

Melissa

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for sharing this gorgeous tropical sunrise with us. My favorite line is " Liquid movement of the changing sky." Great job with this ABC poem which kept the sequence going on all lines.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Thanks so much, Helen! I appreciate your lovely review.

Melissa

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written ABC poem and an excellent picture of the tropical sunrise you describe in your poem and it is both complementary to one another. I wish I could be there.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Thanks so much, Sandra.

All the best!

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

I love this picture it is so serene and is like a gift from God showing us the way to a very beautiful day. One waiting for the sun to come up.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Oh, I love how you put that... just beautiful.... thanks so much for your reply and review. I hope you have a beautiful day full of sunshine.

Melissa

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This poem speaks about the wonderful tropical sunrise in view and how enchanting and breathtaking moment it is the poet enjoys is the theme; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Thanks so much, have a great day!

Melissa

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

This vividly lovely and well expressed ABC poem reminded me of my years spent living and working in Norfolk, Virginia.
We lived just minutes from the beach.
I used to walk down with Gidget, my Chihuahua, every morning just before sunrise to watch the sun crest over the horizon.
The fresh sea air, the slightly briny, fishy smells...
...I truly miss those days.

~Dean

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018

Hey, Dean, we live in the Richmond, VA area and go to VA Beach to enjoy the sand and waves. It is so quiet on the beach in the mornings.

Thank you diff the great review.

Melissa