Tanka(pink commands the sky)
A Tanka poem22 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO PAM: The way you have played with reality here is okay. That's what painting and writing is all about. It takes your reader's imagery beyond the norm. This kind or work is what expresses your unique way of expressing real life. This is where, Pamusart is outstanding. She is being, Pam. And that's okay with me. God bless you Pam. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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HELLO PAM: The way you have played with reality here is okay. That's what painting and writing is all about. It takes your reader's imagery beyond the norm. This kind or work is what expresses your unique way of expressing real life. This is where, Pamusart is outstanding. She is being, Pam. And that's okay with me. God bless you Pam. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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Wow. Your comments mean a lot to me. I appreciate your fine reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I enjoyed how you used the term oxymoron in the third line. Your painting is lovely. I liked the use of the bright colors--the impossible and play with the reality of nature. Your painting and poem had a playful, storybook quality.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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I enjoyed how you used the term oxymoron in the third line. Your painting is lovely. I liked the use of the bright colors--the impossible and play with the reality of nature. Your painting and poem had a playful, storybook quality.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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Thank you Cindy for your wonderful review
Comment from Pantygynt
And the sunflowers have turned their backs on the sun, which they never do. They seem to be getting ready for an early start tomorrow. 'Oxymoron makes a good pivot but less so a satori as it follows so logically from the first two lines.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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And the sunflowers have turned their backs on the sun, which they never do. They seem to be getting ready for an early start tomorrow. 'Oxymoron makes a good pivot but less so a satori as it follows so logically from the first two lines.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018
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Thank you Jim for your insightful and helpful review
Comment from DonandVicki
I love sunflowers in painting, I studied Van Gogh's sunflowers in school and Just love your artwork as well. The Tanka is very well composed. Don and Vicki.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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I love sunflowers in painting, I studied Van Gogh's sunflowers in school and Just love your artwork as well. The Tanka is very well composed. Don and Vicki.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Hi DonandVicki. Yeah. Van Gogh is my favorite artist by far. I want to do a vase with sunflowers in honor of him. I fooled even Van Gogh aficionados that one of my paintings was his. I posted it before I knew you. It is called ?The Joke?. The aftermath of the punchline. Here is a link to it. Some believed me. Heehee. Thank you for another lovely review
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PLEASE let me get a look at it, Is it in your portfolio? Let me know if you ever want to sell another painting. Don
Comment from susand3022
You might be surprised! There's a man in Providence who decided that this empty lot that had been there for years was just an ugly eyesore. Last summer he planted Sunflowers, the whole field full. You could see it from the highway and all over the place. It was beautiful. Like your painting. ð???
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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You might be surprised! There's a man in Providence who decided that this empty lot that had been there for years was just an ugly eyesore. Last summer he planted Sunflowers, the whole field full. You could see it from the highway and all over the place. It was beautiful. Like your painting. ð???
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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We had sunflowers on our property when I was a kid before the fire burned everything down. Thank you for your lovely review
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tanka. The pink skies are beautiful at sunset. The sunflower fields are a great contrast against the pink skies and the orange sun low in the sky.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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A very well-written Tanka. The pink skies are beautiful at sunset. The sunflower fields are a great contrast against the pink skies and the orange sun low in the sky.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review
Comment from Gloria ....
And so right you are, Pam. This is a terrific pairing with your artwork, oxymoron is a fine satori. It does make for some lovely art work and poetry though.
Another excellent piece here. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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And so right you are, Pam. This is a terrific pairing with your artwork, oxymoron is a fine satori. It does make for some lovely art work and poetry though.
Another excellent piece here. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Thank you Gloria for your lovely review
Comment from Mastery
Yes, but I love the ingenuity brought to the canvas here. LOL The sky is an exaggeration but a good one as far a sI am concerned. I think I can do this, Pam. I am sure gonna try. Bob
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Yes, but I love the ingenuity brought to the canvas here. LOL The sky is an exaggeration but a good one as far a sI am concerned. I think I can do this, Pam. I am sure gonna try. Bob
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Lol Bob. You have my permission. Thank you for your lovely review You have my permission. I still have this one. Thank you for your lovely review
Comment from mermaids
The scene may be impossible, but one never knows. I like the image created in your words and the poem is warm, it adds beauty to the arrival of cold winter. I also like your painting.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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The scene may be impossible, but one never knows. I like the image created in your words and the poem is warm, it adds beauty to the arrival of cold winter. I also like your painting.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you mermaids for your lovely review
Comment from Lady Jane
True, true...bright sunflowers mid a backdrop of Lucious pink, LOL...but, hey, it could happen, right? Just look at the painting. Good use of the tanka format and satori. The beginning and ending lines work well together so...as you put it, it may not happen in real life, but that's what imaginations are for! Yours works wonders and is so very inventive. Love this one.
Janelle
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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True, true...bright sunflowers mid a backdrop of Lucious pink, LOL...but, hey, it could happen, right? Just look at the painting. Good use of the tanka format and satori. The beginning and ending lines work well together so...as you put it, it may not happen in real life, but that's what imaginations are for! Yours works wonders and is so very inventive. Love this one.
Janelle
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you Janelle for your wonderful review. Nice to see you tonight
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How's your turkey day prep going?
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and you need to send me your addy for home. I am mailing out xmas cards this week and your name wasn't on the Fanstory card list Mustang Patty put together...unless I am blind, or missing a page. lol
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I can?t do any cooking
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I thought you had family coming for dinner. Aren't they there to help you roast that bird? Do I need to come to your house and cook for you, LOL? I'll just charter a plane, hehe
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No. We are going to our daughter?s house. I just have to bring ice cream and a pie I bought. I will send my address via email. Where is this list? Thank you
