That special foment
A common pastime4 total reviews
Comment from CD Richards
I'm touched, Dip, that you thought to write me this fun poem. I'd even go so far as to say it's a fomentous occasion ;-)
Are you by any chance a Tim Minchin fan? This line:
Life is a hill, go climb it. Life is an ocean, go swim it
Reminds me of a little section in his song The Hammer, from Matilda the Musical:
Life's a ball, so learn to throw it
Find the bally line and toe it
And always keep your feet inside the line
Of course, I don't think either of us are particularly good at heeding that little bit of advice.
Well done, and thanks :)
Craig
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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I'm touched, Dip, that you thought to write me this fun poem. I'd even go so far as to say it's a fomentous occasion ;-)
Are you by any chance a Tim Minchin fan? This line:
Life is a hill, go climb it. Life is an ocean, go swim it
Reminds me of a little section in his song The Hammer, from Matilda the Musical:
Life's a ball, so learn to throw it
Find the bally line and toe it
And always keep your feet inside the line
Of course, I don't think either of us are particularly good at heeding that little bit of advice.
Well done, and thanks :)
Craig
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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my pleasure my ally in rhyme..We are both grossly misunderstood! lol
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not quite sure what this is about Dip, but it seems like a rant and I'm not sure if you are unhappy here or sad, or maybe you had a tipple tonight? Anyway I hope you sober up soon, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Not quite sure what this is about Dip, but it seems like a rant and I'm not sure if you are unhappy here or sad, or maybe you had a tipple tonight? Anyway I hope you sober up soon, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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It's a nonsense poem Dolly inspired by a profile thought that CD posted . Shit stirring and clowning is a common Aussie pastime We don't have to be serious all the time Dolly lol
'rant' n. loud and excited speech...hehe nah, just playing at 730am on a Wednesday morning as I just remember to put the garbage bins out lol
Thanks for reading and still giving 5 stars for this heap of crap, much appreciated
dip
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading your poem and think you did a good job writing about the points that bother you. i take it you see a lot of changes need to be made. i hope you have great remainder of your day. Regards,
Melissa
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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I enjoyed reading your poem and think you did a good job writing about the points that bother you. i take it you see a lot of changes need to be made. i hope you have great remainder of your day. Regards,
Melissa
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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It was purely written as a nonsense poem Sugar ray I wrote it in 2c mins and 54 seconds lol not to be taken seriously at all.
Thanks for going to the trouble to comment much appreciated
Comment from kahpot
Wow! you have certainly expressed it all in this intriguing read, and from the land down under to boot, but I agree with the work we read or see is taken in so many different ways "eye of the beholder", I enjoyed this very much, well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Wow! you have certainly expressed it all in this intriguing read, and from the land down under to boot, but I agree with the work we read or see is taken in so many different ways "eye of the beholder", I enjoyed this very much, well done****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Just a fun write about nothing I call it a 'Seinfeld moment" thanks for commenting , much appreciated
dip
