Tanka(two deer, buck and fawn)
A Tanka poem22 total reviews
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
I like the sound of deer heaven, Pam.
Wonderful imagery and nice alliteration with such a beautiful painting to accompany your words.
Best wishes
Mitchell
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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I like the sound of deer heaven, Pam.
Wonderful imagery and nice alliteration with such a beautiful painting to accompany your words.
Best wishes
Mitchell
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Thank you Mitchell for your truly lovely review
Comment from country ranch writer
Oh look a banquet to be had just ahead for his lovely looking family.such a lovely family it is to just walking side by side with not a care in the world to worry about.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Oh look a banquet to be had just ahead for his lovely looking family.such a lovely family it is to just walking side by side with not a care in the world to worry about.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Thank you country ranch writer for another wonderful review
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Pam as I view this oil painting I'm reminded of the story Bambi. And I clearly remember the spots on his back and the adventure that came along with the spots. The tan colored dears accented by the light colored grass brightens up the picture so well, makes for a beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Pam as I view this oil painting I'm reminded of the story Bambi. And I clearly remember the spots on his back and the adventure that came along with the spots. The tan colored dears accented by the light colored grass brightens up the picture so well, makes for a beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you Mary for your wonderful review. The male does not have spots on Earth. Heehee.
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You are so sneaky. Lol! I still think of Bambi
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Two Deer Buck and Fawn, looks good and captures this idyllic scene where happy, safe creatures enjoy the finest pleasures. Nice.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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This tanka, Two Deer Buck and Fawn, looks good and captures this idyllic scene where happy, safe creatures enjoy the finest pleasures. Nice.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you Bill for your lovely review. Nice to see you tonight
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tanka about the deer feeding on the garden flowers. They find it sweet treats from their usual diet of green grass they have to eat every day.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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A very well-written Tanka about the deer feeding on the garden flowers. They find it sweet treats from their usual diet of green grass they have to eat every day.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review
Comment from Gloria ....
I have always wondered what heaven would look like, and you have shown us now and I would guess for deer these flowers would be mighty tasty and if they're in heaven they would stop chomping off my tulip flowers each year.
Really neat, Pam.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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I have always wondered what heaven would look like, and you have shown us now and I would guess for deer these flowers would be mighty tasty and if they're in heaven they would stop chomping off my tulip flowers each year.
Really neat, Pam.
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Lol Gloria. So you have delicious delicacies too. You made me laugh out loud. But dear ate our entire lawn one time. Thank you for your lovely review
Comment from susand3022
If I were a deer and ate flowers, I bet pink ones would be right up there, I wonder if they're like deer cotton candy. Heaven indeed!! :-) I have to say, you have a way with the daisy type of flowers, picturing an entire field of them and just a couple of deer does indeed sound like Heaven for the deer. A sweet poem to reflect your painting. Susan
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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If I were a deer and ate flowers, I bet pink ones would be right up there, I wonder if they're like deer cotton candy. Heaven indeed!! :-) I have to say, you have a way with the daisy type of flowers, picturing an entire field of them and just a couple of deer does indeed sound like Heaven for the deer. A sweet poem to reflect your painting. Susan
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you Susan for your lovely review
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is very positive and uplifting. I like the line, "tasty pink flowers." I like the idea of heaven for deer. They need such a place to satisfy their taste for "delicious delicacies." I like the expressions on the two deer. They look satisfied. Thank you for sharing your two talents with us.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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This is very positive and uplifting. I like the line, "tasty pink flowers." I like the idea of heaven for deer. They need such a place to satisfy their taste for "delicious delicacies." I like the expressions on the two deer. They look satisfied. Thank you for sharing your two talents with us.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you Jesse for your lovely review
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You're welcome, Pam.
Jesse
Comment from DonandVicki
I am sure that Deer and all other animals for that matter will go to heaven. You paintings are very enjoyable and very fitting for your well composed poetry. Don
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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I am sure that Deer and all other animals for that matter will go to heaven. You paintings are very enjoyable and very fitting for your well composed poetry. Don
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you DonandVicki for your wonderful review
Comment from sunnilicious
That's a very creative idea. Deers are pretty. I've seen a few in my life probably all in upstate NY. Good visual imagery. Well thought out and clearly written. Good work :)
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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That's a very creative idea. Deers are pretty. I've seen a few in my life probably all in upstate NY. Good visual imagery. Well thought out and clearly written. Good work :)
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you Alicia for your lovely review
