Morning Dawns for You
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This ode is inspiring and speaks how hopeful and promising morning dawn God gifts for a good start of the day; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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This ode is inspiring and speaks how hopeful and promising morning dawn God gifts for a good start of the day; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love new dawns because the bring such promise and every day is so different! I love the sentiments behind these words Melissa, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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I love new dawns because the bring such promise and every day is so different! I love the sentiments behind these words Melissa, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Dolly. Have a wonderful day.
Melissa
Comment from Dean Kuch
If there is but one thing we can be sure of it's the fact that the sun will rise eventually and another new day will dawn.
No matter how bad the day before might have been tomorrow will grace us with a brand new day.
What is not guaranteed is that we will be around to see it.
Nice writing as always, Melissa.
~Dean ;)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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If there is but one thing we can be sure of it's the fact that the sun will rise eventually and another new day will dawn.
No matter how bad the day before might have been tomorrow will grace us with a brand new day.
What is not guaranteed is that we will be around to see it.
Nice writing as always, Melissa.
~Dean ;)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Dean. I just realized that I may not have addressed the prompt.... focused on a loved one... I?m going to check it, and you may see a different slant.
Always,
Melissa
Comment from tfawcus
How true. I make a point of being up by dawn these days, to remind me of it - not to mention taking the new puppy out for his morning constitutional! LOL
One can see why people through the ages have attributed a divine connection to the dawn, and all the promise it holds.
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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How true. I make a point of being up by dawn these days, to remind me of it - not to mention taking the new puppy out for his morning constitutional! LOL
One can see why people through the ages have attributed a divine connection to the dawn, and all the promise it holds.
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Thanks so much for the lovely review. It is a special time of day!
Melissa
Comment from Jean Hornby
This is beautiful , short and sweet. It fills the reader with inspiration and though only a few words , it's message is strong and inviting . Hope to see more spiritual writing from you : )
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This is beautiful , short and sweet. It fills the reader with inspiration and though only a few words , it's message is strong and inviting . Hope to see more spiritual writing from you : )
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Jean.
Melissa
