Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Melissa, this is a wonderful poem dedicated to your sister. She must be delighted. It just shows how much you care for each other. I loved your poem, and the photo is so apt. Kind regards. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018

Thank you, Ulla!

M

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

A most delightful and appropriate image you've chosen to go with this peaceful and well-constructed 5-7-5. Looking at each day as an opportunity to start afresh is a pretty handy attitude to adopt. Fine job. Craig

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Craig. All the best!

Melissa

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's always great to know that each new day offers the possibility of "another fresh start." Well said in these few lines to remind us the promises we have in God each day.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Helen. All the best!

Melissa

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Beautiful artwork as usual. Your entry fits the 5-7-5 format, and best of luck in the contest. This suggests an atmosphere of peace and reassurance that a new day promises a fresh start. An uplifting thought. "Quiet dawning day" makes a beautiful phrase. judi

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Thank you very much, Judi.. All the best.

Melissa

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am trying hard to catch up, but your being so prolific makes it difficult! Thank you for sharing your positive message in this tiny poem, with effective alliteration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Hey, hey Joan.... thank you.. I happen to be recovering from leg surgery and have the time to enjoy FS right now. I sincerely appreciate your reviews. Warm regards.....

Melissa

reply by Joan E. on 19-Nov-2018

I am so glad you discovered FanStory to keep you distracted while you recuperate. Speedy recovery- Joan

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is really very nicely composed. Each day does offer us 'another fresh start.' Hopefully we don't flub it up and if we do, make amends right away. Always a challenge. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Thanks again, Marilyn

Melissa

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written three-line poem. Each morning gives us another chance to see and love our loved ones again. Many times we don't see it that way and often think it is just another day to struggle through.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Thank you, Sandra. A very astute review.

Melissa

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Melissa, now this is a good one. Written true to form - lines one and two interconnect well and line three reads like a satori. You are churning out the poems - I shall never keep up with you. LOL! I wish I had more time. A good 5/7/5 and I wish you good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Hugs, Dorothy. Thank you. I must admit I have been in a foot cast for the past few weeks, with three weeks more to go, and am required to keep it elevated (reconstructive surgery). So, I have had the time to devote to these poems. I am glad you like.

Melissa

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

You have a collection of beutiful landscapes pics don't you? LOL! :) ;) A wonderful write here, Melissa, love the refreshing air you have created! :) ;) Makes the reader really want to step back and take a deep breath...and just 'be'. :) ;) Be sure to pop back in there and change "give" to 'give' .... I think that may be an issue here. :) ;) thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette ;)

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Thank you very much, Yvette, I will go take a look now. All the best,

Melissa

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Very well done, Melissa. This is the fine tribute to your sister and I really love the art you chose for your piece. It has such a calming affect and conveys peace. It reminds me of the scripture that says God's faithfulness is new every morning.
All my best,
Sally

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Thanks so much, Sally! I was thinking the same thing as I wrote.

Have a lovely day.

Melissa