Little Kiwi Bird
A 5-7-5 poem17 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Little Kiwi Bird, looks good and lets us know that THIS kiwi bird either has a friend or is being collected for a delicious kiwi lime pie.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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This 5-7-5, Little Kiwi Bird, looks good and lets us know that THIS kiwi bird either has a friend or is being collected for a delicious kiwi lime pie.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Lol Bill. Love your wit. Thanks for the great review
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the kiwi bird that is held by a boy in a blue shirt and yellow buttons. A very beautiful illustration to complement your poem.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the kiwi bird that is held by a boy in a blue shirt and yellow buttons. A very beautiful illustration to complement your poem.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful poem and painting, your words have described this artwork wonderfully, I love the way you have made this work look like the Kiwi bird, the colors blend beautifully, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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What a beautiful poem and painting, your words have described this artwork wonderfully, I love the way you have made this work look like the Kiwi bird, the colors blend beautifully, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you kahpot for your wonderful review
Comment from Gloria ....
This is most interesting Pam. I get a charge out of the kiwi bird and the child in the blue shirt and the yellow. There is much poignancy in these few words and vivid images.
Another fine write my friend. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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This is most interesting Pam. I get a charge out of the kiwi bird and the child in the blue shirt and the yellow. There is much poignancy in these few words and vivid images.
Another fine write my friend. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you Gloria for another lovely review
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh, how charmingly sweet. Love the simplicity of the artwork with the nice poem. Together make a wonderful combination. Each day hold a surprise for your readers. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Oh, how charmingly sweet. Love the simplicity of the artwork with the nice poem. Together make a wonderful combination. Each day hold a surprise for your readers. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you Marilyn for another wonderful review
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Kiwi Bird, well Pam I must say that I've never heard of that but I know you've done the research and your drawings are really authentic I love them oh, they are so original, the originality of them are so great. As always I enjoyed your poems and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Kiwi Bird, well Pam I must say that I've never heard of that but I know you've done the research and your drawings are really authentic I love them oh, they are so original, the originality of them are so great. As always I enjoyed your poems and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you Mary You are so good to me. Thanks for the great review and extra star
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As always my pleasure to read whatever your PIN puts on paper
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Oh. Mary. I have been so worried about you. You git married and disappeared. I am so relieved. Nice wedding? Happy?
Comment from Lady Jane
with yellowed buttons- could you just say,
with yellow buttons
What a precious image, Pam. The hands look so realistic and that kiwi bird looks so comfortable nuzzled up to the child's chest. You always represent your images with excellent verbiage and great detail. Wonderful penning. Like I said, you're really getting the hang of these shorted pieces. :)
Janelle
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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with yellowed buttons- could you just say,
with yellow buttons
What a precious image, Pam. The hands look so realistic and that kiwi bird looks so comfortable nuzzled up to the child's chest. You always represent your images with excellent verbiage and great detail. Wonderful penning. Like I said, you're really getting the hang of these shorted pieces. :)
Janelle
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Hi Janelle. Yellow buttons are those that started out as yellow. Yellowed means the white buttons have yellowedwith age. That was my intention. Thank you for your lovely review
Comment from jenintorre
This little kiwi bird is the same colourful as the kiwi fruit. Was one called after the other? Or is it a coincident? Very nice painting and good, descriptive poem. Love Jen. X
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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This little kiwi bird is the same colourful as the kiwi fruit. Was one called after the other? Or is it a coincident? Very nice painting and good, descriptive poem. Love Jen. X
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Not sure Jen. Kiwi fruit is the national fruit and kiwi bird is the national bird of New Zealand. Thank you for your lovely review
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written, descriptive 5-7-5 poem about the little kiwi bird being held by the boy in the blue shirt. Very good words and very nice painting! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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This is a very well written, descriptive 5-7-5 poem about the little kiwi bird being held by the boy in the blue shirt. Very good words and very nice painting! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you Teri for the great review
Comment from susand3022
Last night someone posted Haiku guidelines and so I'm reading them like I haven't read them before. How do you do it? LOL My first thought after I read them, and the ones for Tanka which are similar, was that I'm going to have to go back through the ones on my wall and redo them. (I have a whole bunch of stuff on a corkboard on the wall next to my bed here.) lol
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Last night someone posted Haiku guidelines and so I'm reading them like I haven't read them before. How do you do it? LOL My first thought after I read them, and the ones for Tanka which are similar, was that I'm going to have to go back through the ones on my wall and redo them. (I have a whole bunch of stuff on a corkboard on the wall next to my bed here.) lol
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Hi Susan. Some of my 5-7-5 are indeed haikus. But, for my purposes it does not matter what I call it. I just want a short poem for my painting. Thank you for your lovely review
