Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight into this subject matter, Praying it positively affects all readers with a harden heart to consider and adopt it's positive messaging. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019

Thanks for such a positive review. I am glad you found it insightful.

dragonpoet

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I certainly agree with you. Oh for a perfect world. I enjoyed reading you free verse poem. It is very well written with a very good flow. Best wishes. Jen

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018

Jen, Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the generous rating.

Joan

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written free verse poem about the things we believe. If we all believe that we all have good inside of us and seek the good instead of all the bad, we will start to see we can make the world a better place.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thank you, Sandra.


Joan

Comment from Donka Kristeva

Excellent

Realistic beliefs worded clearly , simply and convincingly. You touch on the hot issues of the day. My favourite is the third stanza, we are the children of One God and are equally and individually loved by Him.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks for the thorough review, Donka Kristeva

Joan

Comment from A. Willow Bends

Excellent

I believe I am sad that I do not six stars to award because I believe you nailed it with this brutally honest and truthful piece of work. Great job with condensing all that seems to be wrong in our world today. Unique and creatively done. Blunt and bravely true. I love it.
Good luck!
Wendy

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks for reading and review this. I appreciate the good luck wishes.

dp

Comment from patsolstad

Good

This is a strong poem, made stronger by the repetition of "I believe." You have used alliteration quite effectively, such as That/though, same/start, open/our, abound/around, plus several more. I believe you have a mistake in the third verse. You probably meant to say "Would build peace." Nice work!

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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I will check out the mistake.

dragonpoet

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Hello, friend.

Long time, no see! I hope you are well and are making plans for a happy and fun Christmas. *smile*

I hope you already know how I enjoy your posts. But this time I enjoyed more than usual - though I don't think it was intentional. (haha!)

I got tickled at the following line:
--> Layers of love Would build peas

and thought PERHAPS,based on the context, that you meant PEACE? Thank you so much, if so, that gave me the biggest smile ALL DAY!

Thanks - I enjoyed the smart message of your post. Have a marvelous day!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks for reading. I am glad you liked it. I will correct the error.

Joan

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. I also agree with you. I wish we could do this.
I found no errors in your work. I have no suggestions for corrections.
All the best

Jan

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the generous rating.

Joan

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Each time I read one of your poems, I believe in the art of humanity. Your writes are always poignant, but hopeful. I agree with your sentiments, the world could be absence of racism, hate, and wars. We must remove fear and narcissism.

Thank you for making me believe in the good of the world. You are truly a good person.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2018

Thanks for the encouraging words and high rating.

Joan

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Hi
Really enjoyed this positive poem, very well written with some very heartfelt lines.
Words we can all adhere to.......beautiful

Slight spag.....layers of love would build (peace)

Loved it
Mitchell

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018

Thanks oh so much Mitchell.

Joan