Beyond Suffering
Freedom is coming tomorrow7 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Eugene, you are one of my favorite faith-based poets here on FanStory! Thank you for this! It is so inspiring and encouraging. I have been through some long fiery trials and it is only understandable in the light of God's presence.
All my best to you in the Free Verse Contest!
Sally
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Eugene, you are one of my favorite faith-based poets here on FanStory! Thank you for this! It is so inspiring and encouraging. I have been through some long fiery trials and it is only understandable in the light of God's presence.
All my best to you in the Free Verse Contest!
Sally
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Sally,
Thank you for your wonderful and uplifting review. Your comments made my day and are greatly appreciated..
Eugene
Comment from Lady Jane
brings remembrance of (times long) past
playful songs(,) beautiful melodies
This poem is so fluid in its presentation and holds many profound pearls of timely wisdom. I think many can relate to the hope that exudes from this piece. The manageable ability we have to appreciate our bounty and look for the good around us shines through this penning. Remembering that He descended below it all and rose so that we may live again is not a new concept, but many struggle with feeling worthy of this ultimate sacrifice.
Your piece is presented with such delicacy and perfected verbiage. I enjoyed it thoroughly. My favorite stanza:
Beyond Suffering ...
divine perfection becomes one
in triumphant shouts of worshipful praise
lifting countless voices in spiritual refrain. - moving beyond the worldly veil and fixing our eyes on eternity, that is where the joy and hope on this earth ultimately arise from.
Janelle
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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brings remembrance of (times long) past
playful songs(,) beautiful melodies
This poem is so fluid in its presentation and holds many profound pearls of timely wisdom. I think many can relate to the hope that exudes from this piece. The manageable ability we have to appreciate our bounty and look for the good around us shines through this penning. Remembering that He descended below it all and rose so that we may live again is not a new concept, but many struggle with feeling worthy of this ultimate sacrifice.
Your piece is presented with such delicacy and perfected verbiage. I enjoyed it thoroughly. My favorite stanza:
Beyond Suffering ...
divine perfection becomes one
in triumphant shouts of worshipful praise
lifting countless voices in spiritual refrain. - moving beyond the worldly veil and fixing our eyes on eternity, that is where the joy and hope on this earth ultimately arise from.
Janelle
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Janelle,
Wow! Thank you for your wonderful and uplifting review. Your words and comments humble me and are greatly appreciated.. You are a true blessing to me.
Eugene
Comment from apky
I loved the last stanza so much, because it came closest to describing my own beliefs in the great big Beyond:
Beyond Suffering ...
life is born anew in fervent prayer
cleansing the heart, mind, body, and soul
in forgiveness life-changing joy evermore.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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I loved the last stanza so much, because it came closest to describing my own beliefs in the great big Beyond:
Beyond Suffering ...
life is born anew in fervent prayer
cleansing the heart, mind, body, and soul
in forgiveness life-changing joy evermore.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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apky
Thank you for your wonderful review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from DonandVicki
I enjoyed reading your authors notes as much as reading your poem. The poem touched me and was indeed inspirational. Very well composed and reads smooth. Don
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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I enjoyed reading your authors notes as much as reading your poem. The poem touched me and was indeed inspirational. Very well composed and reads smooth. Don
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Donald
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Amen! Inspired and inspiring poetry. I love it when Christians praise God in poetry. You have penned a blessed song of praise and a hymn of joy. God bless.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Amen! Inspired and inspiring poetry. I love it when Christians praise God in poetry. You have penned a blessed song of praise and a hymn of joy. God bless.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Donka,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This a strong and compelling write, Eugene -- just wonderful in its 'drumbeat' and overall message of deliverance! :) ;) I really think your chosen format here is a winner in any book, even though there is no competition....but it is a winner of souls for Christ! :) If nothing else, you have written it in a manner that makes others 'think' what 'could be'....thank you for sharing! :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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This a strong and compelling write, Eugene -- just wonderful in its 'drumbeat' and overall message of deliverance! :) ;) I really think your chosen format here is a winner in any book, even though there is no competition....but it is a winner of souls for Christ! :) If nothing else, you have written it in a manner that makes others 'think' what 'could be'....thank you for sharing! :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Yvette,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from Jaye Bennett
This should be posted on the walls of psychiatrists, psychologists, and counselors offices where it could bring healing either on its own, or in conjunction with the learned people who work to help troubled souls. Wow!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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This should be posted on the walls of psychiatrists, psychologists, and counselors offices where it could bring healing either on its own, or in conjunction with the learned people who work to help troubled souls. Wow!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Jaye,
Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging review. Your words and comments humble me and are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
