Gun For Hire
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Comment from Rob Caudle
I found myself having to go back and read to see if it was written in a different style from the one I just read! This is wonderfully written and paced! Excellent!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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I found myself having to go back and read to see if it was written in a different style from the one I just read! This is wonderfully written and paced! Excellent!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Rob, Thank you for you critic. It gives one a lot to consider. Catherin.
Comment from RichardFann
Liked "With my hat pulled low over eyes collar turned up against the chill of the falling snow, I hunkered down in the saddle."
Liked the style of a Texas man telling the story in his style of speaking. It's new to me as a person from England, United Kingdom.
Also liked the sensible sized paragraphs and the logical flow of the story.
Small point: Was confused about who the "I" is in the story. If it's the man called Texas, then it may be better to tell the whole story in the first person from the start.
Thanks for this great story. Would like to hear chapter 2.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Liked "With my hat pulled low over eyes collar turned up against the chill of the falling snow, I hunkered down in the saddle."
Liked the style of a Texas man telling the story in his style of speaking. It's new to me as a person from England, United Kingdom.
Also liked the sensible sized paragraphs and the logical flow of the story.
Small point: Was confused about who the "I" is in the story. If it's the man called Texas, then it may be better to tell the whole story in the first person from the start.
Thanks for this great story. Would like to hear chapter 2.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your exceptional rating and the critic....will make the note suggestions into corrections. Catherin
Comment from Sugarray77
I really enjoyed reading this western tale of Texas and Cal. I hope you craft another story featuring them in the future. Great dialogue within the narrative.. authentic to the time and period. Good job and good write.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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I really enjoyed reading this western tale of Texas and Cal. I hope you craft another story featuring them in the future. Great dialogue within the narrative.. authentic to the time and period. Good job and good write.
Melissa
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your excellent rating and your kind words.....this is a sequel to "The Cabin". Catherin
