Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem 'carries' the theme well, and exposes the titles to the readers. 'Grant'ed, there is a story underlying this effort which sounds a bit sad.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018

Aren't you clever. Are you saying that I filled the ''bill' in one ''schott?'' haha The poster was dismal but I thought it worked. Cheers, j

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

Loved how you slipped those movie titles in. Well done. Highlighting them in red was a great idea. Great rhyme, and well-illustrated poem. Love the humor. You are so creative.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review. It was fun to write and remember his old movies. Cheers, j

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how freely he is singing the serenade at the loss of his love and when his best has ruined his life; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018

Thanks for the review. It was a fun write. Cheers, j