Chains
The mind controls everything spontaneously.6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This poems tell us about the pain of living in the past. It is true we have no do overs. So why not just get on with life and change the way you live and not let the past weigh you down.
Hope this did well in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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This poems tell us about the pain of living in the past. It is true we have no do overs. So why not just get on with life and change the way you live and not let the past weigh you down.
Hope this did well in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thank you Joan for your faithful reading of my work. I am trying very hard to get back to what I love...writing. I am healing.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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My pleasure. I am glad to here that you are healing. Writing helps that.
Joan
Comment from Liz O'Neill
One of my friends, years ago wrote this wisdom. "the chains that bind us are the chains that blind us." Hopefully, the reader will read this poem and reflect on the chains in their life. Hopefully, they will find from this declaration, why they suffer so. Hopefully they, you and I will heal a bit from this message. Well written. I am voting for this.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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One of my friends, years ago wrote this wisdom. "the chains that bind us are the chains that blind us." Hopefully, the reader will read this poem and reflect on the chains in their life. Hopefully, they will find from this declaration, why they suffer so. Hopefully they, you and I will heal a bit from this message. Well written. I am voting for this.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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I am very thankful to you for these supportive comments. I am healing and trying to get back to what I love...writing.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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Comment from Jaye Bennett
A profound comment on life. I find the sentiments a bit dark, but I write dark, too, on occasion, so that isn't a problem for me. The wording and the syllable format are good. A slight flow problem. All in all a nice poem.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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A profound comment on life. I find the sentiments a bit dark, but I write dark, too, on occasion, so that isn't a problem for me. The wording and the syllable format are good. A slight flow problem. All in all a nice poem.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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I am very thankful to you for these supportive comments. I am healing and trying to get back to what I love...writing. I have been in a dark mood but am trying to lighten up.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Chains, has the correct formatting and finds the poet and reader wishing that life had been different. Life, however, allows change on a daily basis, and Memories c@n be both cherished and denied.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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This 5-7-5, Chains, has the correct formatting and finds the poet and reader wishing that life had been different. Life, however, allows change on a daily basis, and Memories c@n be both cherished and denied.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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I am very thankful to you for these supportive comments. I am healing and trying to get back to what I love...writing. I have been in a dark mood but am trying to lighten up.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
Those memories are often chains or sometimes wings
but it is true we can never change the past
only try to make the future better
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
Those memories are often chains or sometimes wings
but it is true we can never change the past
only try to make the future better
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you kindly for this supportive review. I appreciate your time. This was easy for memories of a recent tragedy just won't let go. A wish to do over will never be fullflled.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
So well illustrated. Love your poem. You did a perfect 5-7-5. I really like 'yesterday's chains ... memories'. It matches well with your chosen artwork.
Great work!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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So well illustrated. Love your poem. You did a perfect 5-7-5. I really like 'yesterday's chains ... memories'. It matches well with your chosen artwork.
Great work!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you kindly for this supportive review. I appreciate your time. This was easy for memories of a recent tragedy just won't let go. A wish to do over will never be fullflled.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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Brigette, that is what I was thinking as I was reading through your beautiful poetry. I did not want to pry. I understand those tragic memories that chain you down in sorrows and regrets. Many prayers will I pray for you.
Love, Gale
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Thank you for this.
Brigitte
