How Embarrassing!
We've all had one of those days...10 total reviews
Comment from Jaye Bennett
You have written quite a 5-7-5 poem. It is colorful, it is fanciful, it is delightful. You have inserted whimsey, which doesn't happen often in poetry. The picture is awesome. So is the use of the term "graceful heavens!"
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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You have written quite a 5-7-5 poem. It is colorful, it is fanciful, it is delightful. You have inserted whimsey, which doesn't happen often in poetry. The picture is awesome. So is the use of the term "graceful heavens!"
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much, Jaye -- was in one of those 'forget about reality' moods, the pic was just a bonus!! :) ;) Appreciate your stopping in - be sure to take a few 'reality forgotten' moments of your own! :) ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 and an excellent illustration of the rainbow clouds you described. I did not see it in real life but I did see it in many photographs over the years.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 and an excellent illustration of the rainbow clouds you described. I did not see it in real life but I did see it in many photographs over the years.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much, Sandra -- was in one of those 'forget about reality' moods!! :) ;) Appreciate your stopping in - be sure to take a few 'reality forgotten' moments of your own! :) ;)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, How Embarrassing, has the correct formatting and gives the reader an ide@ of what the gag reel might look like at the end of a heavenly day. Nice.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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This 5-7-5, How Embarrassing, has the correct formatting and gives the reader an ide@ of what the gag reel might look like at the end of a heavenly day. Nice.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much, Bill -- was in one of those 'forget about reality' moods!! :) ;) Appreciate your stopping in - be sure to take a few 'reality forgotten' moments of your own! :) ;)
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 prompt. It is so colorful and the theme is cute and clever too. I hope you do well in this contest. Have a great day:). All the best!!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 prompt. It is so colorful and the theme is cute and clever too. I hope you do well in this contest. Have a great day:). All the best!!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much, Melissa -- was in one of those 'forget about reality' moods, the pic was just a bonus!! :) ;) Appreciate your stopping in - be sure to take a few 'reality forgotten' moments of your own! :) ;)
Comment from LIJ Red
One can see diffracted sunlight in all kinds of places, even pressure washer spray. I have not seen the one you describe...yet. Excellent five seven five, interesting art and note.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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One can see diffracted sunlight in all kinds of places, even pressure washer spray. I have not seen the one you describe...yet. Excellent five seven five, interesting art and note.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much, LlJ Red -- was in one of those 'forget about reality' moods, the pic was just a bonus!! :) ;) Appreciate your stopping in - be sure to take a few 'reality forgotten' moments of your own! :) ;)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I really enjoyed your contest poem, Mystery Author. The picture is beautiful. I like the different colored rainbow fonts. Good job on the syllable count per line. This poem could be taken literally and also as a metaphor for a day in the life of . . . . Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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I really enjoyed your contest poem, Mystery Author. The picture is beautiful. I like the different colored rainbow fonts. Good job on the syllable count per line. This poem could be taken literally and also as a metaphor for a day in the life of . . . . Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much, Jan -- was in one of those 'forget about reality' moods, the pic was just a bonus!! :) ;) Appreciate your stopping in - be sure to take a few 'reality forgotten' moments of your own! :) ;)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Oh, how beautiful! And, a perfect 5-7-5 poem. Your poem and the accompanying artwork made me initially think of angels in heaven tripping over rainbows. Then I re-read the poem, and imagined how ungraceful heaven itself was.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Oh, how beautiful! And, a perfect 5-7-5 poem. Your poem and the accompanying artwork made me initially think of angels in heaven tripping over rainbows. Then I re-read the poem, and imagined how ungraceful heaven itself was.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much, Gale -- was in one of those 'forget about reality' moods, the pic was just a bonus!! :) ;) Appreciate your stopping in - be sure to take a few 'reality forgotten' moments of your own! :) ;)
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
I love your twister colorful rainbow. although from your poem I see it represents Kayos. And yes we all stumble into those moments and days. I've never seen a rainbow like that but I must say again it is beautiful. best wishes for your entry of the 5-7-5. Is very unique
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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I love your twister colorful rainbow. although from your poem I see it represents Kayos. And yes we all stumble into those moments and days. I've never seen a rainbow like that but I must say again it is beautiful. best wishes for your entry of the 5-7-5. Is very unique
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much, Mary -- was in one of those 'forget about reality' moods, the pic was just a bonus!! :) ;) Appreciate your stopping in - be sure to take a few 'reality forgotten' moments of your own! :) ;)
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Yep I do. Thanks for the reminder
Comment from Raul1
Rainbows are in Heaven, if you believe. I think that there are all kinds of positive things there. A nice beautiful place to stay when you are a good person. Interesting poem. Excellent work!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Rainbows are in Heaven, if you believe. I think that there are all kinds of positive things there. A nice beautiful place to stay when you are a good person. Interesting poem. Excellent work!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much, Raul -- was in one of those 'forget about reality' moods!! :) ;) Appreciate your stopping in - be sure to take a few 'reality forgotten' moments of your own! :) ;)
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You're welcome
Comment from RodG
One imagines this could only be an angel who tripped, perhaps when watching over someone. She would fall into a cloud, of course. I love what she utters.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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One imagines this could only be an angel who tripped, perhaps when watching over someone. She would fall into a cloud, of course. I love what she utters.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much, RodG -- was in one of those 'forget about reality' moods!! :) ;) Appreciate your stopping in - be sure to take a few 'reality forgotten' moments of your own! :) ;)
