Sins of Chaos
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Double Crossed/Part Two"A Novel of the Breedline series
7 total reviews
Comment from apky
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. And the end is both blood-curdling and edge of seat. Apparently the others have arrived, maybe Abby has changed to her Lupa and began her revenge, maybe even both!
As I've said before, you're the mistress of this genre. And this chapter was squeaky clean, nothing to correct or change.
Another captivating photo/artwork - nobody can top you there each time around.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. And the end is both blood-curdling and edge of seat. Apparently the others have arrived, maybe Abby has changed to her Lupa and began her revenge, maybe even both!
As I've said before, you're the mistress of this genre. And this chapter was squeaky clean, nothing to correct or change.
Another captivating photo/artwork - nobody can top you there each time around.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Awww... thank you my dear friend! :)
You brought tears to my eyes girl! You definitely keep my confidence to continue to write. So happy you approve. BTW, I love your book! OMG! Lots of erotic passion and action! Both are my favorite!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
I'm glad you love my books. I stopped posting the series here because not many here "get it", so I feel this is the wrong platform for my Sophisterotica, as I've dubbed them.
But I bless the day I found you here. You're worth scores of fans!
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Oh, I do love your story! I will be a fan for life! :)
Big hugs from Arkansas!
Comment from rwilliam
Intriguing picture. I like it.
her she-wolf was going to tear his eyes out and then go for his balls. ---LOVED this line so much! :) Hee hee
What a chapter. WOW. Great writing. I love the ending. I think she's 'come -alive'...lol Look out bad guys.
This was a fantastic chapter. You wrote it very well.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Intriguing picture. I like it.
her she-wolf was going to tear his eyes out and then go for his balls. ---LOVED this line so much! :) Hee hee
What a chapter. WOW. Great writing. I love the ending. I think she's 'come -alive'...lol Look out bad guys.
This was a fantastic chapter. You wrote it very well.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Thank you girl! :)
I found this picture on facebook someone shared. I stole it! Haha! I thought it was captivating.
So glad you mentioned the scene with Abbey thinking in her mind about sweet revenge. Cole Decker better get ready. The drug he has her on won't last forever.
Thank you for always having my back. Your support is important to me. Without you, I would have never started my story. You know that right?
Big hugs!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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Well, I don't know? I think you would have written eventually, but either way, I'm thrilled that I could be a part of your writing journey. You make me so proud. You most definitely have a gift for writing. Hugs, Becca
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Thank you girl! :)
Comment from royowen
Another fantastic episode Shana. At last I sense some hope for Abby, she must have turned, too late for the drug, in fact there had been only three days supply to keep Abby subdued. Even though we're not sure about the Steven situation, I don't think Steele has any scruples. Wells one, sweet girl, great episode, had me absorbed. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : I am short of ten girls. I am ten girls short?
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Another fantastic episode Shana. At last I sense some hope for Abby, she must have turned, too late for the drug, in fact there had been only three days supply to keep Abby subdued. Even though we're not sure about the Steven situation, I don't think Steele has any scruples. Wells one, sweet girl, great episode, had me absorbed. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : I am short of ten girls. I am ten girls short?
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Roy :)
Glad you really enjoyed the action in this chapter. Cole Decker better watch his back. Ms. Abbey wants to put an end to his evil ways, and it looks like she plans to do it in a 'not so nice' way. LOL!
Thanks for the advice. I like your way better. It sound more clear. :)
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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I'm rooting for Abby, or Cole Decker repents, I suspect he won't, Great scribing Shana. Roy
Comment from ngage
Another brilliant chapter, Ms. Shana. Great job with the photo. Very captivating!
Although the chapter is unfortunate for Abbey and Steven, it was professionally written and well thought out. You took me right there into their tragic events. Hopefully the Breedline will come to their rescue.
Nate
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Another brilliant chapter, Ms. Shana. Great job with the photo. Very captivating!
Although the chapter is unfortunate for Abbey and Steven, it was professionally written and well thought out. You took me right there into their tragic events. Hopefully the Breedline will come to their rescue.
Nate
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Thank you Nate :)
You're too good to me my friend. I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed another chapter. Your reviews are so pleasant and I love all your encouraging words.
Hugs,
Shana :)
Comment from fm wright
Oh, wow, the ending to this chapter is incredible. Sadly I'm out of sixes. I so much want Abby and Steven out of the situation their in and Steele and Cole stopped from what they're planning. I really can hardly wait till the next chapter involving them. Anyway, great writing!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Oh, wow, the ending to this chapter is incredible. Sadly I'm out of sixes. I so much want Abby and Steven out of the situation their in and Steele and Cole stopped from what they're planning. I really can hardly wait till the next chapter involving them. Anyway, great writing!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much! :)
I'm really enjoying hearing from you. Your reviews are so kind. You really give me encouragement and the drive to keep writing. This is the biggest reward I could ever ask for.
Big hug,
Shana :)
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Can't help the review-your writing is just so enjoyable to read!
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That is awesome! :)
Comment from beizanten
A very interesting past chapter summary, you entice your reader to read your story well. You have many interesting races here in your story so the reference help. You have done well, keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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A very interesting past chapter summary, you entice your reader to read your story well. You have many interesting races here in your story so the reference help. You have done well, keep up the great work!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Thank you! :)
So glad you enjoyed the chapter. This is my fourth series of the Breedline, and I dearly love each and every character... even some of the naughty ones. Lol!
Stay tuned, more Breedline adventures to come. Hope to hear from your again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from SLMorrical
This is well written. It's an easy flowing read. This was interesting, and kept my interest. The ending has me wanting to read more. This shows why you're ranked at the #15 spot. Very well done.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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This is well written. It's an easy flowing read. This was interesting, and kept my interest. The ending has me wanting to read more. This shows why you're ranked at the #15 spot. Very well done.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
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Thank you! :)
So glad you found the chapter easy to follow. I do have a lot going on and many characters, so this is awesome to hear. I hope you find the time to stop in again. Stay tuned ... more Breedline adventures to come!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
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I look forward to the more to come.
